diff --git a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md index e1d466e..a4e28ec 100644 --- a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md +++ b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md @@ -287,3 +287,32 @@ order to matter?* Here, that the seam closes. Six lines of the document say it d nobody holding the door, and you come back thin"** is a scene, it is built entirely from lines already written, and it lands on the one character who knew what it cost before the session started. + +--- + +## APPLIED — v0.22, commit 65ae156 + +All six fixes are in. **Two things changed on the way in, and both are corrections to this +record rather than to the document.** + +**Fix 5 was wrong about which three things a fight costs.** This pass wrote *"the northern +seam, the depot, and telling Ivy"*. The Pacing Note names telling Ivy as one of **three +things never to cut** — *"Do not cut: telling Ivy, the almanac pair, or the Close. They are +the scenario."* So the honest instruction is not that a fight costs all three. **Two go and +the third cannot**: telling Ivy happens compressed, or it happens at the stump instead, +which the Close already branches on. That is what went into the document. Written from +memory of the act rather than from the Pacing Note — the pass-4 habit, in a pass that +otherwise checked everything against source. + +**And applying fix 5 turned up a stale figure that no guard could see.** The Pacing Note +said the likeliest fight runs *"a median 24 rounds"*, and EXPOSURE's four-sentence summary +said *"a median 13 rounds, 24 if the column joins"*. **The baseline says 21 at two joining +and 25 at three. 24 is neither**, and it survived because **it carried no citation marker** +— `check-cited` resolves the markers that exist and cannot know that a bare number wanted +one. Both now read **21** and cite `packs line.hollow6col2.median`. + +- ⚠ **That is the fifth reader this project has caught unable to see its own format**, after + cast declarations, beat tags, citation markers and the `POWER:` marker. The pattern holds: + the guard checks what is marked, and the defect lives in what is not. **The asymmetric + counter this wants** — something reporting figure-shaped text with no marker beside it — + is not built, and is the obvious twenty-first guard.