From 3af4c55f129c2d67727a9e39a615e2ed0620346a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: slaguru666 <111923774+slaguru666@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 13 Sep 2026 17:34:46 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?docs:=20playtest=2011=20=E2=80=94=20record=20wh?= =?UTF-8?q?at=20changed=20on=20the=20way=20into=20v0.22?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Fix 5 as written said a fight costs the northern seam, the depot and telling Ivy. The Pacing Note names telling Ivy among the three things never to cut, so the applied version says two go and the third is compressed or moves to the stump. Written from memory of the act rather than from the Pacing Note. And applying it found a stale figure no guard could see: 'median 24 rounds' in two places, where the baseline says 21 at two of the column joining and 25 at three. It survived because it carried no citation marker, and check-cited can only resolve markers that exist. Fifth reader caught unable to see its own format. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 --- docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md | 29 ++++++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 29 insertions(+) diff --git a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md index e1d466e..a4e28ec 100644 --- a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md +++ b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_11.md @@ -287,3 +287,32 @@ order to matter?* Here, that the seam closes. Six lines of the document say it d nobody holding the door, and you come back thin"** is a scene, it is built entirely from lines already written, and it lands on the one character who knew what it cost before the session started. + +--- + +## APPLIED — v0.22, commit 65ae156 + +All six fixes are in. **Two things changed on the way in, and both are corrections to this +record rather than to the document.** + +**Fix 5 was wrong about which three things a fight costs.** This pass wrote *"the northern +seam, the depot, and telling Ivy"*. The Pacing Note names telling Ivy as one of **three +things never to cut** — *"Do not cut: telling Ivy, the almanac pair, or the Close. They are +the scenario."* So the honest instruction is not that a fight costs all three. **Two go and +the third cannot**: telling Ivy happens compressed, or it happens at the stump instead, +which the Close already branches on. That is what went into the document. Written from +memory of the act rather than from the Pacing Note — the pass-4 habit, in a pass that +otherwise checked everything against source. + +**And applying fix 5 turned up a stale figure that no guard could see.** The Pacing Note +said the likeliest fight runs *"a median 24 rounds"*, and EXPOSURE's four-sentence summary +said *"a median 13 rounds, 24 if the column joins"*. **The baseline says 21 at two joining +and 25 at three. 24 is neither**, and it survived because **it carried no citation marker** +— `check-cited` resolves the markers that exist and cannot know that a bare number wanted +one. Both now read **21** and cite `packs line.hollow6col2.median`. + +- ⚠ **That is the fifth reader this project has caught unable to see its own format**, after + cast declarations, beat tags, citation markers and the `POWER:` marker. The pattern holds: + the guard checks what is marked, and the defect lives in what is not. **The asymmetric + counter this wants** — something reporting figure-shaped text with no marker beside it — + is not built, and is the obvious twenty-first guard.