diff --git a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND.md b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND.md index 88cec8c..ca9ab58 100644 --- a/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND.md +++ b/docs/scenarios/CLEAN_GROUND.md @@ -5,12 +5,44 @@ > and clean soil, and there is no north. Two weeks ago a contractor felled the tree the > whole arrangement was pegged to.* -**Status:** v0.9 — **absorbs all fixes from desk passes 1, 2 and 3** (eight, seven, eight), plus the post-pass finding that the four-player cut fields three attackers, not four -(`CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_1.md`, GM chair, seed 4271). No clue is now behind a single roll, -every roll in the document has a written miss, Act Four has a spine and its tell is -ungated, and about 25 minutes of pre-written cuts are in the Pacing Note. **Still not -convention-ready:** it wants a stress re-run of Act Four, a player-chair pass, and a -print-ready handout pack. +## STATUS — read this before anything else + +| | | +|---|---| +| **Version** | **v0.9**, 13 September 2026 | +| **Can it be run?** | **Yes, from this document alone.** A GM with this file and the compendium can run it end to end. | +| **Is it convention-ready?** | **No.** It has never been played by human beings, and there is no print pack. | +| **Playtesting** | Three desk passes, all fixes applied: `CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_1.md` (GM chair, seed 4271), `_2.md` (Act Four stress, seed 9314), `_3.md` (player chair, contrarian, seed 5580). Twenty-three fixes plus one post-pass. | +| **Runtime** | 4h00 including a break. Desk pass 1 ran 4:25; the **Pacing Note** carries ~25 minutes of pre-written cuts. Take them as the default. | +| **Players** | 4–6 from the duty roster. The cast is declared in the Casting section and the build enforces it. | + +### The three things that are not obvious + +Read GM ESSENTIALS in full — this is only what a GM most often discovers too late. + +1. **Opposed rolls use a scenario-local ruling**, because `rules.mjs` has none. GM + ESSENTIALS has it. Two beats depend on it. +2. **Ashcroft cannot fight** — no weapon, no unarmed skill, a 1% attack. That is deliberate + and his player must be told before the game. See his entry in Casting. +3. **The lethal encounter is the column, in Act Two** — not the monster in Act Four, which + cannot hurt anybody. EXPOSURE has the measured figures and the reason. + +### Still to do + +- **A print-ready A4 handout pack**, 11pt minimum. **CG-H03a and CG-H03b must print + identically** or the almanac trick dies. +- **A run with human beings.** No desk pass can settle whether Act Four's spine holds + 45 minutes with no mechanical threat, or whether THE OFFER plays as a decision. + +### Two decisions that are not a scenario's to make + +- **Does `rules.mjs` gain a real opposed roll?** If it does, delete the local ruling. +- **Convention one-shot, or campaign opener?** The cancellation ending is a one-shot; the + "leave it filed" branch is a spine. This decides what finished means. + +Those are the two that change the document. **Open Questions at the foot carries the full +list**, including the ones already settled, and is the only place decisions are recorded — +this block does not keep a second copy. **Source:** freely adapted from *A Hollow Tree* (Cathal Fitzpatrick, 2023, 23 min) — post-nuclear survivors walking north for clean ground, and a fast thing that wears @@ -984,23 +1016,6 @@ twice.* --- -## What this outline does not yet have - -1. ~~Pregens.~~ **Done** — see Casting, above. Six from the duty roster, no new sheets. -2. ~~The read-aloud text.~~ **Done** — three blocks, in place in Act Two and the Close. -3. ~~Handouts.~~ **Done** — four sheets, CG-H01 to CG-H03b. Still need a print-ready HTML - pack (A4, 11pt minimum) before a convention; the text is final. -4. ~~A written exposure model for Act Four.~~ **Done** — measured, 2000 runs a row at seed - 11 against the named cast, reproducible from the command in the section. -5. **Desk playtest.** Pass 1 failed and its eight fixes are absorbed in v0.6 - (`CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_1.md`). Pass 2, the Act Four stress re-run - (`CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_2.md`), and pass 3, the player-chair contrarian run - (`CLEAN_GROUND_PLAYTEST_3.md`), are both done and **all three passes' fixes are absorbed - in v0.8**. **The three-pass cadence is complete.** What remains before convention-ready is - the print pack, and the two decisions in Open Questions that are not a scenario's to - make. A - human-table run remains a separate instrument from all of them. - ## Open questions for Tim - Is this a **convention 4-hour** or a **campaign opener**? The cancellation ending is a