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BELOW
- 1 · Wetherlaw farm — ash in the yard for four years
- 2 · The ash edge — straight 400 m, then a right angle
- 3 · Ventilation head — painted, and warm to the hand
- 4 · Postal pipe — 4-inch pneumatic, sealed 1974
- 5 · Service adit — 400 m of 1962 concrete, lit
+ 1 · Wetherlaw farm — coal soot in the yard
+ 2 · The soot edge — straight 400 m, then a right angle
+ 3 · Vent head — warm, smells of a coal fire; the crossing
+ 4 · Postal pipe — 4-inch pneumatic; Centre answers
+ 5 · The adit — backfilled 1975
- 6 · Blast door and lobby — never locked
- 7 · Control Room — the map, the tannoy, the desk
- 8 · Registry — fifty-two years of files
- 9 · Sick bay
- 10 · Crèche and school
- 11 · Pipe room — the outgoing tray
- 12 · Plant floor — generators and the relay
+ 6 · Lobby and Enquiries — no form for visitors
+ 7 · Control Room and studio — the tannoy, the safe
+ 8 · Registry — the Order and the Establishment
+ 9 · Sick bay and maternity
+ 10 · Crèche and school
+ 11 · Pipe room — Centre's in-tray
+ 12 · Plant floor — boilers, coal face, transmitter
+ 13 · Vigil hall *
+ 14 · Allotments and Buffer Depot *
+ 15 · The Sump *
+ * pit galleries, not drawnSO-H04 · SECTION · STANDING ORDER
- ISSUE 1 · NOT TO BE REMOVED FROM THE SEAT
+ ISSUE 2 · NOT TO BE REMOVED FROM THE SEAT
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# Crossing case — The Custodians: STANDING ORDER
-> *Two hundred and six people went underground in 1974 to govern the country after the
-> war. There was no war. They have been governing it for fifty-two years, the order that
-> put them there renews itself every ninety days, and the next renewal is on Thursday.*
+> *A thousand people are waiting under Sheldon Moor for the all-clear from a war that never
+> happened. Every ninety days, somebody writes to tell them to keep waiting. It is not
+> the government.*
## STATUS — read this before anything else
| | |
|---|---|
-| **Version** | **v0.7**, 15 September 2026 — absorbs desk playtests 1–5; the slot is 3h15 |
-| **Can it be run?** | **Yes, from this document alone,** with the compendium for sheets and the three bestiary creatures. |
-| **Is it convention-ready?** | **Nearly — what is left is a run with human beings.** Five desk passes, no human runs. `_1.md` (GM chair, 5291) · `_2.md` (Act Three stress, 8143, creatures run through the real fight harness) · `_3.md` (player chair, contrarian, 3307, reached ending 1) · `_4.md` (the clock, cuts taken as written, 6620) · `_5.md` (the retry fix, verified). Every content defect the five passes found is fixed, and the budget question they raised is decided: **the slot is 3h15.** |
-| **What it is** | A **three-act one-shot**. It ends in the session; there is no second part and the text must not promise one. |
+| **Version** | **v1.0**, 16 September 2026 — the rewrite. Same site, same people, same art; a new case inside them |
+| **Can it be run?** | **Yes, from this document alone,** with the compendium for sheets, the two cast actors, and the three bestiary creatures. |
+| **Is it convention-ready?** | **No. It needs desk passes again.** `_PLAYTEST_1.md` to `_5.md` tested v0.7, which was a different plot: 231 people, no crossing, no Mr Smith, no broadcast. Their structural lessons are carried forward below and marked where they are; their timings are not evidence for this version. |
+| **What it is** | A **three-act one-shot** and the second appearance of **Mr Smith**, who was planted in THROUGH TRAIN. It ends in the session. The thread does not. |
| **Players** | 4–6 from the duty roster. The cast is declared in Casting and the build enforces it. |
-| **Runtime** | **2h50 of play in three acts of 45 / 75 / 50 plus a ten-minute break — 3h00 wall, in a 3h15 slot.** Act Two is budgeted at its **uncut** base, which is the figure passes 1, 3 and 4 all reconcile to. The fifteen minutes of slack are deliberate. **The Pacing Note's cuts are not defaults; plan to take none of them** — and the budget above is the no-cuts budget, which is the pair v0.6 briefly got wrong. |
+| **Runtime** | **Three acts of 45 / 75 / 50 plus a ten-minute break — 3h00 wall, in a 3h15 slot.** These are v0.7's measured budgets, kept because the shape is the same. **They are unmeasured for this plot.** |
-### The three things that are not obvious
+### The things that are not obvious
-1. **Nobody in Bellhouse is a monster and almost nobody is hostile.** The population are
- civil servants doing an appalling job impeccably, and they will offer the agents tea
- before they ask them anything. The GM reflex under pressure is to make the underground
- people sinister. Do not. The horror is that they are correct.
-2. **The apocalypse is not a bomb, it is a reconciliation.** When the site's population
- record exceeds the surviving population of the region it governs, the record resolves
- the contradiction by making the region match. That is the threat, it is arithmetic,
- and Act Two is where the players are shown the sum.
-3. **Act Three is a decision, not a fight.** All three endings are real and all three
- cost something. If the table reaches for violence the scenario still works, but see
- EXPOSURE — the quarantine unit will kill them and is meant to be argued with.
-4. **Nothing in Act One is hidden, and that is load-bearing.** Joan Wetherlaw points at
- every clue the party misses, because she has been trying to show somebody for four
- years. Desk pass 1 failed six of ten rolls in Act One and lost nothing. **A GM who does
- not notice this will start gating clues behind the dice and the act will die.** The
- rolls buy speed and detail. They never buy access.
+1. **The brief is a rescue, and it is a diplomatic one.** The department wants these
+ thousand people brought home and wants to know who has been keeping them down there.
+ Nobody below is expendable, and the agents are told so in writing. **A party that solves
+ Bellhouse with violence has failed the brief even if it wins the fight.**
+2. **The people below are not a cult and do not know they are becoming one.** They are a
+ council: minutes, rotas, a housing list, a complaints procedure that takes eleven weeks.
+ The occult is in the *procedures* — a form of words at the bulletin, a lullaby on the
+ crèche intercom, a dream everyone born below has had. **Never put an altar in this
+ building.** If a player can point at it and say "cult", the GM has overplayed it.
+3. **Mr Smith is never met.** He is a hand on the letters, a mark on the franking, and a
+ face nobody can picture. He is the thread between this case and THROUGH TRAIN and he
+ must still be a thread at the end. **Do not stat him, do not describe him, and do not let
+ the table corner him.**
+4. **Releasing them is not the hard part. The broadcast is.** Cancelling the Standing Order
+ takes one warrant card and no roll. But the order says that when the Seat surfaces it
+ *speaks* — and what it will say is Mr Smith's, not the government's. **The table must
+ neutralise the broadcast before, or while, they let the Seat go.** Act Three is that
+ order of operations.
+5. **Detention is a scene, not a defeat.** The wardens can put the party in the Sump. The
+ real danger of being held is being *entered on the Establishment*, and Pennyfeather is the
+ person with the pen. Carried forward from v0.7's first desk pass: **no failure below
+ ends the case — it costs a scene.**
### Still to do
-- **A run with human beings.** Five desk passes have been run; no human table has.
-- **Handout production.** The three handouts are in the Foundry compendium (STANDING
- ORDER — Player handouts) but have no print pack. CLEAN GROUND's
- `CLEAN_GROUND_HANDOUTS.html` is the model.
-- **A decision on Kit Marlow** — see Open questions. She is the cost of the tidiest
- ending and the draft may be leaning on a seventeen-year-old too hard.
+- **Desk passes.** Minimum three, in the house order: GM chair, Act Three stress with the
+ detention fight run through the harness, then a player-chair contrarian.
+- **Art.** Joan Wetherlaw still has no portrait. Mr Smith must never have one. Nothing else
+ is needed; the eight plates and the section map carry over.
+- **Handout production.** Six handouts are written here and are in the compendium. No print
+ pack.
---
@@ -49,868 +55,866 @@
- **System:** d100 roll-under a percentage skill. **Special** under a fifth of the skill,
**critical** under a twentieth; 96–99 always fail and 00 always fumbles.
-- **Opposed rolls: a tie goes to whoever is being acted upon.** Resisting is stronger than
- the numbers look. Two beats in Act Two depend on this.
-- **Coherence runs 10 → 0** and measures how well-filed an agent is. Spending it is how
- the supernatural works, and **nothing in this scenario gives any of it back.**
-- **Borrowed Authority:** a named credential with a scope. Inside its scope there is no
- roll — it costs 1 Trust and it works. One tier beyond is a roll at −20 per red flag
- broken. Two tiers beyond is impossible at any skill. **Act Three's best ending is a
- Borrowed Authority problem,** so read that section of the rules before you run this.
-- **A warrant card is a named authority.** This matters more here than in any other case
- in the corpus, and Act Three turns on it.
+- **Opposed rolls: a tie goes to whoever is being acted upon.**
+- **Coherence runs 10 → 0.** Crossings, the tape, and the cancellation all cost it, and
+ **nothing in this scenario gives any back.**
+- **Panic is live** in Act Two's detention and Act Three's broadcast. Triggers are marked.
+- **Standing Order 9 is live.** Nothing modern goes through; charge for *using*, never for
+ carrying. Down here a modern object is also **evidence** — the first thing a warden will
+ ask about.
+- **Borrowed Authority:** a named credential with a scope. Inside scope, no roll: it costs
+ 1 Trust and works. One tier beyond is a roll at −20 per red flag broken. **A warrant card
+ of the Department is inside scope at Bellhouse** — the Standing Order names it.
+- **Content warnings:** confinement underground; a detention and a beating if the table
+ resists it; children as the object of an occult procedure (never on screen); a birth; an
+ elderly woman's shame; the possibility of a whole region being subsumed.
---
## Overview
-The department commissioned Regional Seat of Government 12 — **Bellhouse**, under
-Sheldon Moor in the Peak District — in 1962, and staffed it in 1974 during a genuine war
-scare. Its Standing Order says: *on execution, the site assumes the government of Region
-12 and does not surface until this order is cancelled by the named authority.*
+The department commissioned Regional Seat of Government 12 — **Bellhouse** — in 1962, cut
+into the worked-out galleries of Sheldon Colliery under Sheldon Moor in the Peak District.
+It was built for four hundred staff and dependants, stocked as a Buffer Depot for the whole
+region's reconstitution, and fed by the pit's own coal seam and a lead-miners' drainage
+level that runs clean limestone water.
-The order was executed on 4 November 1974 **as a drill**. Deputy Controller Edith Marlow
-filed the drill as live, on purpose, because she believed a real one was coming inside
-the year and wanted the site already running when it did.
+In November 1974, during an exercise, a man calling himself **Mr Smith, for Centre**
+delivered a live execution order. Deputy Controller **Edith Marlow** knew it was exercise
+week. She signed it anyway, and she has never been able to say why.
-Reality took the filing. Two hundred and six people went down. Down there the war
-happened, and they have been governing its aftermath for fifty-two years: issuing ration
-books, logging fallout that nobody up here can measure, answering correspondence from
-towns that are perfectly fine.
+**Reality took the filing.** Four hundred and twelve people went down on 4 November 1974
+and the war happened — on paper, which is where this setting keeps the truth. The pit was
+"closed" in 1975. The adit is backfilled rubble. **Bellhouse is struck from the surface
+record, and the only way in is a crossing.**
-The order renews every ninety days by standing instruction. Each renewal writes a little
-more of the "after" into the moor above, which is why a farm at Wetherlaw has been
-sweeping ash off its yard for four years. **Renewal 211 is due on Thursday, and Registry
-has done the sum: at 211 the site's population record exceeds Region 12's surviving
-population on paper.** A record cannot hold both. It resolves by correction.
+Fifty-two years later there are **nine hundred and ninety-nine** people below: a hundred
+and eighteen of the 1974 intake, and eight hundred and eighty-one born there. They run a
+functioning, exasperating, 1970s council: ration books, a housing list, a Parks and
+Allotments committee that meets in a coal gallery under sodium lamps. **Every ninety days a
+renewal arrives by pneumatic pipe from Centre** with radiation readings and one instruction:
+*remain*. Centre has never missed one.
+
+**Centre is Mr Smith.** He has spent fifty-two years using the most obedient population in
+England as an experiment: can a people be *filed* into a congregation without ever being
+told? The Seat's procedures have drifted, renewal by renewal, into observances. Its
+children dream the same dream. Its establishment has been steered to a number.
+
+**On Thursday the thousandth person is born below.** Annex D of the Standing Order puts the
+Seat at reconstitution strength, and a Seat at strength surfaces and **broadcasts the
+Reconstitution Address** to the region it governs. The tape in the studio safe is not the
+1974 recording. Centre replaced it in 2019. **Anyone who hears it to the end is entered on
+the Establishment**, and Region 12 has a million people in it.
### Design intent
-1. **The end of the world is a document, and the people administering it are kind.** This
- is a post-apocalyptic scenario in which the apocalypse is entirely clerical and every
- person responsible for it believed they were doing their duty.
-2. **It is an arrangement case, not a fight.** Two of the three endings involve no
- violence at all, and the one creature that can wipe the party is there to be talked
- down. The bestiary entries are load-bearing but the dice are not the point.
-3. **The cost is named and not softened.** The tidy ending kills sixty-one children who
- have no record above ground. The text says so plainly and does not offer the GM a way
- to make it painless. If the table finds a fourth way out, let them have it.
-4. **It is deliberately NOT CLEAN GROUND.** That case is a filed valley of people walking
- north forever, found by accident, resolved by cancellation. This one is a filed
- institution that works, that the department built on purpose, and that can be *amended*
- rather than cancelled.
-5. **Three things stay unresolved.** They are named in the GM notes as *do not resolve*.
+1. **A post-apocalypse that is a council meeting.** The end of the world is administered
+ kindly, badly and in triplicate. The horror is that it works.
+2. **The occult is procedural and it is quiet.** Six small wrong things, none of which is a
+ pentagram. The table assembles them; the document never announces them.
+3. **A rescue with a deadline and a brief.** The department wants the people alive, the
+ site's story on file, and Mr Smith's hand identified. It does not want a body count, and
+ the brief says so before anybody crosses.
+4. **One fight, and it is a detention.** The wardens are sent to bring the agents in, not
+ to kill them. The fight is real, measured, and avoidable, and losing it costs a scene.
+5. **The thread survives.** Mr Smith is identified and not caught. Three things stay
+ unresolved and the GM notes name them.
---
## Session Timing
-**The slot is 3h15.** Decided 15 September 2026, after four desk passes measured Act Two's
-floor at about 66 minutes against a budget that said 55. The alternative was cutting twelve
-minutes out of the sick bay, which is where Revelation 3's best route lives. **The slot
-moved instead, because 3h00 was an assumption and the sick bay is not.**
+**The slot is 3h15.** The acts keep v0.7's measured budgets because the shape — an outside
+approach, a long investigation below, a decision at a fixed hour — is the same. **They have
+not been measured for this plot**, and desk pass 1 must record them.
| | Act | Budget | GM checkpoint |
|---|---|---|---|
-| 1 | **The Returns** — Wetherlaw farm, the vent head, getting in | 45 min | They are at the blast door by 0:40 |
+| 1 | **The Crossing** — the Bureau, Sheldon Moor, through, and the Enquiries counter | 45 min | They are through the crossing by **0:25** |
| — | *Break* | 10 min | |
-| 2 | **Bellhouse** — the population, the Registry, the sum | **75 min** | Pennyfeather has shown them the sum by **1:50** |
-| 3 | **Renewal** — Thursday, the signing, the decision | 50 min | Sowerby has the folder open by **2:20** |
+| 2 | **The Establishment** — the site, the wardens, Centre's hand | **75 min** | They know about **Annex D** by **1:50** |
+| 3 | **The Address** — Thursday, the thousandth, the broadcast | 50 min | They are at the tape or the transmitter by **2:40** |
| | **Total** | **3h00** | against a **3h15** slot |
-**Running times, so the checkpoints mean something:** Act One 0:00–0:45 · break to 0:55 ·
-Act Two 0:55–2:10 · Act Three 2:10–3:00. **A checkpoint is a point you can still correct
-from**, which is why the sum is wanted at 1:50 with twenty minutes of Act Two left, and why
-Act Three's is ten minutes in rather than at the signing. If you pass one, take cuts.
-
-### The fifteen minutes of slack are the point
-
-**3h00 of content in a 3h15 slot, and the difference is deliberate.** The house playtest
-standard says a scenario that lands on schedule to the minute with zero slack is a *fail*
-for a real table of strangers, and every figure above was measured on desk passes with a GM
-who already knew the document. A real table asks more questions, takes longer to decide,
-and loses five minutes finding the right page.
-
-**What the acts are budgeted at is what they measured**, not what would fit:
-
-| Act | Pass 1 | Pass 3 | Pass 4 *(19 min cut)* | Budgeted |
-|---|---|---|---|---|
-| One | ~50 | ~30 *(Joan skipped)* | ~45 | **45** |
-| Two | **~75** | ~70 | ~66 | **75** |
-| Three | ~45 | ~50 | ~50 | **50** |
-
-⚠ **Act Two's 75 is the UNCUT base, and it is the number three passes agree on.** Pass 4's
-66 is that same 75 with nineteen minutes cut and ten handed back by a retry — the three
-measurements reconcile exactly, and desk pass 5 did the arithmetic.
-
-**Read this before you re-budget anything.** v0.6 briefly set Act Two at 65 — pass 4's *cut*
-figure — while also instructing the GM to take no cuts, which is a ten-minute overrun
-written in on purpose. The retry fix that prompted it is real and worth having, but **it
-moved the act's worst case, not its typical one**: it removes up to twenty minutes of
-variance when filed clues fail, and changes nothing when they do not. Variance is not the
-base. **If the slot ever moves again, budget the configuration you are actually going to
-run.**
+**Running times:** Act One 0:00–0:45 · break to 0:55 · Act Two 0:55–2:10 · Act Three
+2:10–3:00. **The broadcast begins at 2:45 on the session clock** — thirty-five minutes into
+Act Three — unless the table has stopped it.
### Pacing Note — the cuts, written in advance
-⚠ **These are no longer defaults. Take none of them unless you are actually late.**
-
-They were defaults when the slot was 3h00 and Act Two had to lose twenty minutes it did not
-have. At 3h15 the act is budgeted at what it measures, so **the correct number of cuts to
-plan for is zero** — and that matters most for the second one in the table below, which desk
-pass 4 proved costs the price of the likeliest ending rather than "the drawings".
-
-Keep them for the room that runs hot: a table that talks, a GM who is behind at the break,
-a six-hander that splits three ways. **In that order, and stop as soon as you are level.**
+**Take none of them unless you are actually late.** In this order, and stop when level:
| Cut | Saves | What it costs |
|---|---|---|
-| **Fold the pipe room into Registry** — Pennyfeather's office backs onto it and she walks them through on the way to the stacks | ~8 min | Nothing. Revelation 4 still arrives from the relay or from her |
-| **Kit Marlow in the corridor, not the crèche** — she is carrying a drawing somewhere and stops to talk | ~7 min | ⚠ **More than it looks — read the note below before taking this cut** |
-| **The census** (see Act Two) | ~4 min | Atmosphere only |
-| **Skip the Vigil** (Countdown step 4) | ~5 min | The Revelation 3 emergency backstop. Only take this cut if they already have it |
-| **Teague off-screen in Act Three** — he stands down when Sowerby tells him to | ~6 min | The script break, which is the best beat in the act. **Last resort** |
+| **The Bureau in two lines** — hand over SO-H01 and SO-H06 and cut to the moor | ~6 min | Bewley's line about the frank. **Give the frank to them on SO-H01 anyway** |
+| **The Allotments by report** — Kowalczyk hears about the yields rather than walking the galleries | ~6 min | The Buffer Depot clue (supporting) |
+| **The census** | ~4 min | Atmosphere, and the enumeration risk |
+| **The Vigil** (Countdown step 5) | ~5 min | Revelation 3's last backstop. Only if they already have it |
-**Do not cut Pennyfeather's sum, the arrival, or the signing.** They are the act, the tone
-and the decision.
-
-⚠ **The Kit Marlow cut costs more than "the drawings", and desk pass 4 proved it.** That
-pass took the cut, then reached the **narrow** row of ending 3 — the likeliest one, because
-it needs only a single dossier item — whose entire price is *the sixty-one stay unrecorded*.
-Kit **is** the sixty-one made into a person, and her own entry says she should be a person
-before she is a price. Cut her scene and the price is an abstraction the table has no
-feeling about.
-
-**If you take this cut, the corridor version must still do her one job.** She is carrying a
-drawing, she shows it to them without being asked, and she asks the question from her entry:
-**whether she got the blue right.** Fifteen seconds, and the narrow ending keeps its cost.
+**Never cut:** the Enquiries counter, Pennyfeather's return, the crèche, or the studio.
---
## Plot Summary (GM truth)
-Bellhouse is real, it is where the map says it is, and everyone in it is alive.
+**1962.** RSG 12 is built into Sheldon Colliery's worked-out galleries: three upper levels
+of Seat (Control, Registry, studio, quarters, school, sick bay) and the pit below them
+(plant floor, the coal face, the Allotments, the Mill, the Buffer Depot, the Sump). The
+Standing Order is drafted with its annexes. **Annex D, as drafted, says the Seat
+broadcasts a recorded address from the Home Office on reconstitution.** It says nothing
+about who hears it.
-In 1962 the department built RSG 12 into the limestone under Sheldon Moor, as one of a
-dozen regional seats. In October 1974 the scare was severe enough that the site was
-staffed and exercised. The exercise order and the live order are the same document with a
-different box ticked.
+**3 November 1974.** Exercise week. A pleasant man in a grey coat arrives at the lobby with
+a sealed envelope on Centre's paper, franked with a mark Marlow has never seen — a small
+circle with a short stroke through the top of it. It is the live execution order, and it
+has a new Annex D. He waits while she reads it. She asks him whether it is real. **He says,
+"Then it had better be."** She signs. She cannot picture his face and has tried for
+fifty-two years.
-**Edith Marlow ticked the other box.** She was Deputy Controller, she was fifty, and she
-had read the same traffic as everyone else and drawn a harder conclusion. Her reasoning is
-in her own hand in the file: a site that begins governing *after* the event is a site that
-spends its first fortnight arguing about whether it is allowed to. She removed that
-fortnight.
+**4 November 1974.** The order executes. Four hundred and twelve people go down — two
+hundred and sixty-eight staff and a hundred and forty-four dependants, seventy-one of them
+children. The blast door shuts. Reality files a war.
-Reality keeps a record of what belongs where. The record now said Region 12 had been
-attacked, and so it had. Not up here — down there, and in the ground between.
+**1975.** Above, Sheldon Colliery closes overnight. Its foreman, Joan Wetherlaw's father, is
+told to stop digging and backfill the adit, and does. Below, the first child is born:
+**Alice Pennyfeather**, establishment number 413.
-**What the last fifty-two years have been.** Two hundred and six went down; the
-population below is now two hundred and thirty-one, of whom sixty-one were born there and
-have no record anywhere else. They govern a region they have never seen. They receive
-correspondence — it arrives — and they answer it, and their answers go up a pipe that
-does not come out anywhere. Their fallout readings are real readings of a real
-contamination that exists only inside the order.
+**How they have lived.** The Buffer Depot held twenty years' stock for a thousand — flour,
+tins, sugar, blankets, army-surplus bales. The Seat's plant section works the pit's live
+seam for the boilers; the drainage level turns a turbine and fills the reservoir. From 1979
+the Parks and Allotments committee grows food hydroponically in the old galleries under
+sodium lamps: potatoes, beans, mushroom beds on spent straw, trout in the sump tanks, hens in
+the pit-pony stables. The Mill makes cloth from flax and recycled bales. **It should not
+quite be enough, and it has always been exactly enough** — the Depot's ledger ran out in
+1996, and since then its issue book has recorded stock *received from Centre* every ninety
+days. Nobody has seen a delivery. The pipe is four inches wide.
-**What changed four years ago.** Renewals began pushing the boundary outward. Ash that is
-not ash falls on Wetherlaw farm, three-quarters of a mile from the vent head. Joan
-Wetherlaw's dog went out into it in 2024 and came back with an extra week of life in its
-records and none in its body.
+**Why nobody has looked.** The periscope head and the external instruments were sealed in
+1974 by order, against flash blindness, and the seal lifts only on Centre's authority.
+Centre's renewals carry radiation readings. They have never once been good enough.
-**Why the department is here now.** Four months ago one of Bellhouse's returns came out of
-the pipe onto a real desk in Registry — franked 1974, answering a question nobody had
-asked. Bhattacharya's section traced it. In doing so they found the renewal schedule and,
-in the site's own establishment returns, the sum.
+**The experiment.** Mr Smith is a messenger — a clerk of the far side's higher orders, the
+things the department files under *Vesh*. He is not one of them and he does not command
+them; he carries their correspondence, and this is his proposal to them. **A population
+that obeys paper perfectly can be filed into anything.** So he has written to them for
+fifty-two years, and every renewal has moved them one word:
-**The sum.** Region 12's surviving population, as the order records it, decays a little
-each renewal. Bellhouse's population grows. At **renewal 211 — Thursday — the second
-number passes the first.** A governing record whose government is larger than the governed
-is a contradiction, and this one resolves the way records do: it corrects the region.
+- **The bulletin** closes with a response the whole site speaks: *We hold. We count. We
+ answer.* It was *Message ends* until 1983.
+- **The Continuity of Establishment Scheme** licenses marriages "per Centre guidance" and
+ has steered the establishment to a number.
+- **The Vigil**, the annual remembrance for the surface dead, reads a *Region* aloud. The
+ last places on the list are not in Derbyshire, or anywhere.
+- **The crèche intercom** plays a tone at three in the morning "to settle the young" (Centre
+ Circular 88/4). It is the interval signal from the 2019 tape.
+- **Everyone born below has had the same dream** — a long corridor, a counter, a pleasant
+ man who asks their name and writes it down. Nobody from the 1974 intake has.
+- **The children draw the sun** as a circle with a stroke through the top.
+
+**What he wants from Thursday.** Annex D, as he rewrote it, reads: *the Seat at
+establishment one thousand shall surface and address the Region, and those who hear the
+Address are entered on the Establishment.* **The Address is a working.** Heard to its end,
+it enrols the listener — they hold, they count, they answer — and the census, which has
+been counting below for fifty-two years, goes up to count the rest. Region 12 is a million
+people. **That is the threat to the outside world**, and it is why the department cannot
+simply open the door.
+
+**Why the department is here now.** In May a Bellhouse return came out of a Registry
+in-tray at the Bureau, franked 1974, addressed *to Centre*. Registry traced the frank. **The
+same mark is on the letter of instruction a Mr Smith gave a surveyor named Elias Vane in
+1881**, in the Mercy Draw file. Registry's file on Mr Smith has two entries and no face.
### Timeline
| When | What |
|---|---|
-| 1962 | RSG 12 "Bellhouse" commissioned under Sheldon Moor. Standing Order drafted. |
-| Oct 1974 | War scare. Site staffed and exercised; 206 personnel go down. |
-| **4 Nov 1974** | **Marlow files the drill as live.** The order executes. |
-| 1974–2022 | Fifty-two years of government. 61 children born below. Marlow, now 101, is in the sick bay and has not spoken plainly since 2019. |
-| 2022 | Renewals begin to push the boundary. Ash starts falling at Wetherlaw. |
-| 2024 | Joan Wetherlaw's dog goes out into the ash and comes back wrong. |
-| May 2026 | A Bellhouse return arrives in Registry, franked 1974. |
-| **Thursday** | **Renewal 211.** The sum crosses. |
+| 1881 | Mr Smith instructs Elias Vane at Mercy Draw *(THROUGH TRAIN)*. |
+| 1962 | RSG 12 "Bellhouse" commissioned in Sheldon Colliery. Standing Order drafted. |
+| **3 Nov 1974** | Mr Smith delivers the live order. Marlow signs. |
+| **4 Nov 1974** | 412 go down. The order executes. |
+| 1975 | The pit closes; the adit is backfilled. Pennyfeather, the first birth below. |
+| 1983 | The bulletin's closing words change to *We hold. We count. We answer.* |
+| 1988 | Centre Circular 88/4: the crèche intercom. |
+| 1996 | The Buffer Depot's own stock runs out. Issues "from Centre" begin. |
+| 2019 | Centre replaces the Reconstitution tape: *12/R, revised.* Marlow stops speaking plainly. |
+| May 2026 | A Bellhouse return arrives in Registry at the Bureau. |
+| **Wednesday** | **Play begins.** Establishment: 999. Ruth Cotter is due. |
+| **Thursday, 06:00** | Renewal assembly. The thousandth is born. **07:00: the Address.** |
-### Revelations (5, and that is all)
+### Revelations (6)
-1. The site is live and the people in it are alive. *(Act One)*
-2. They believe the war happened, and by their record it did. *(Act Two, first ten minutes)*
-3. It was a drill, and one person filed it wrong on purpose. *(Act Two, Marlow)*
-4. The renewal is what pushes the boundary out. *(Act Two, Kowalczyk or Pennyfeather)*
-5. At 211 the sum crosses and the region is corrected to match. *(Act Two, Pennyfeather)*
+1. **Bellhouse is inhabited and governing** — a thousand people. *(Act One, automatic)*
+2. **They believe the war happened, and Centre tells them every ninety days to stay down.**
+ *(Act One/Two, automatic)*
+3. **The live order was brought by a stranger in 1974, and Marlow signed it knowing it was
+ the exercise.** *(Act Two, three routes)*
+4. **Centre is Mr Smith** — the frank on every renewal is the frank on Vane's letter.
+ *(Act Two, no roll once SO-H05 is in their hands)*
+5. **The site is being made into a congregation.** *(Act Two, cumulative, supporting — the
+ table assembles it)*
+6. **Annex D: at a thousand the Seat broadcasts the Address, and the Address enrols
+ whoever hears it.** *(Act Two, four routes)*
---
## The Countdown — what Bellhouse does on schedule
-The site does not react to the agents. It runs its day. Print this and run it off the
-clock whether or not the players are anywhere near it.
-
-⚠ **The clock starts when they come through the blast door**, not at the start of the
-session, and **every step lands inside Act Two's sixty-five minutes.** That is deliberate
-and it used to be wrong: steps 3 and 4 were written at +1h20 and +2h00, which under any
-budget this scenario has ever had fired *after the act they belong to had ended* — and both
-of them are backstops for Essential revelations, so both were arriving too late to back
-anything up. **If you re-time this table, keep them inside the act.**
+The site runs its day. **The clock starts when Act Two starts.** Every step lands inside the
+act — carried forward from v0.7, where two steps fired after their act had ended.
| Step | When | What happens, whatever the players are doing |
|---|---|---|
-| 0 | On arrival | Shift change. The corridors are briefly full. Nobody is looking for intruders because there has never been one. |
-| 1 | **+15 min** | **The broadcast.** Sowerby reads the daily regional bulletin over the tannoy — casualty figures, ration adjustments, a weather report for a sky nobody has seen. It is four minutes long and the whole site stops to listen. |
-| 2 | **+35 min** | **Teague is told there are strangers below.** From here he is looking for them. He is not yet hostile; he is a policeman with an anomaly. *(Act One's Stealth roll moves this — see there.)* |
-| 3 | **+45 min** | **The establishment return is posted.** Pennyfeather files the population count that makes Thursday's sum what it is. **This is clue 13c**, the second road to Revelation 5: the number is on the front and anybody watching her post it can read it. Stopping her does not stop Thursday — the number is already true — but a player who tries has understood the case. |
-| 4 | **+60 min** | **Vigil.** The site's fifty-two-year remembrance for the surface dead. Everyone attends. It is genuinely moving and it is for nothing. **It is also Revelation 3's last backstop** — somebody reads the 1974 roll of honour and there are no names on it. |
-| 5 | **Thursday, 06:00** | **Renewal 211.** Sowerby signs, Teague countersigns, Pennyfeather files. Act Three. |
+| 1 | **+15 min** | **The bulletin.** Sowerby reads the daily bulletin over the tannoy — rations, a housing list update, radiation readings from Centre. The whole site stops. It ends, and nine hundred and ninety-nine people say *We hold. We count. We answer.* **Panic trigger** for any agent who hears it in a corridor full of people. |
+| 2 | **+30 min** | **Centre Circular.** The pipe delivers SO-H05 to the Control Room. Sowerby reads it twice. |
+| 3 | **+45 min** | **The detail.** Teague and his wardens are sent to bring the agents in. See *The detention*. |
+| 4 | **+55 min** | **The establishment return.** Pennyfeather posts SO-H03 on the Registry board. The number is on the front. **This is clue 13c.** |
+| 5 | **+65 min** | **Vigil.** The Reading of the Region. **Revelation 3's last backstop** — the 1974 roll of honour is read, and there are no names on it. |
+| 6 | **+75 min** | **Ruth Cotter goes into labour.** Larkhall is called. Thursday is tomorrow and the act is over. |
---
## Handouts
-### SO-H01 — The return that came out of the pipe
+The section map is **SO-H04** and is a plate in the compendium, not text.
-*A4, buff, typed on a manual machine, franked 4 NOV 1974. Give it in the briefing.*
+### SO-H01 — The return that came out of the in-tray
+
+*A4, buff, typed on a manual machine, franked 4 NOV 1974 with a small circle cut by a stroke
+at the top. Give it in the briefing.*
> REGION 12 — SEAT RETURN — WEEK 1
-> ESTABLISHMENT: 206. CASUALTIES THIS PERIOD: NIL.
+> ESTABLISHMENT: 412. CASUALTIES THIS PERIOD: NIL.
> REGIONAL SURVIVING POPULATION (EST.): 1,140,000.
-> SUPPLY: 11 YEARS AT CURRENT SCALE.
-> QUERY TO CENTRE: CONFIRM AUTHORITY TO ISSUE RATION DOCUMENTS IN OWN NAME.
-> QUERY TO CENTRE: CONFIRM DISPOSAL OF SURFACE REMAINS AT SHELDON.
+> SUPPLY: 20 YEARS AT CURRENT SCALE.
+> QUERY TO CENTRE: CONFIRM THE GENTLEMAN WHO BROUGHT THE ORDER IS KNOWN TO YOU.
> SIGNED: E. MARLOW, DEPUTY CONTROLLER.
-**What it is for.** Two hidden things. *Casualties this period: nil* is wrong for week one
-after an attack and right for week one of a drill. And the second query asks about bodies
-at Sheldon, which is where the vent head is — the first hint the boundary was always
-touching the surface.
+**What it is for.** *Casualties nil* is wrong for week one of a war and right for week one of
+an exercise. The query is Marlow's only protest, and Centre answered it: the return came
+back with the frank on it. **The frank is the thread.** Bewley points it out.
### SO-H02 — Standing Order 12, extract
-*A4, foolscap, two paragraphs and a signature block. Registry supplies it on request.*
+*Foolscap, three clauses and an annex. Registry supplies it on request.*
> 4. On execution this Seat assumes the government of Region 12 and shall not surface
> until this Order is cancelled by the named authority or by an officer holding a warrant
> of the Department in person at the Seat.
>
-> 5. This Order renews at ninety days by the signature of the Controller, countersigned,
-> and is thereafter filed. Renewal is not a decision and shall not be minuted as one.
+> 5. This Order renews at ninety days on instruction from Centre, and is thereafter filed.
+>
+> 6. On cancellation the Seat shall surface and proceed under Annex D.
+>
+> ANNEX D. The Seat at establishment one thousand shall surface and address the Region by
+> the recorded Address held at the Seat. Those who hear the Address are entered on the
+> Establishment.
>
> NAMED AUTHORITY: SIR HUGH ELLERBY-STANNARD, PERMANENT UNDER-SECRETARY.
-**What it is for.** It is the whole of Act Three. Ellerby-Stannard died in 1981 — but
-clause 4 offers a second door, *an officer holding a warrant in person at the Seat*, and
-every agent at the table is holding one. Clause 5 is the other half: renewal is not a
-decision, which is exactly why nobody down there has ever reconsidered it.
+**What it is for.** Clause 4 is the release: every agent holds a warrant. Clause 6 is the
+trap: **cancelling the order sends the Seat up under Annex D**, so releasing them without
+dealing with the Address starts the broadcast. Annex D's last sentence is the threat, in
+plain civil-service English, and nobody below has read it as anything but a filing note.
-### SO-H03 — Pennyfeather's working
+### SO-H03 — The establishment return
-*A single sheet of squared paper, pencil, in a clerk's hand. She gives it to whoever asks
-her a straight question.*
+*A Registry form, typed, initialled A.P. Posted on the board at Countdown step 4, or handed
+to anyone who asks Pennyfeather a straight question.*
-> RENEWAL 209 — SEAT 229 — REGION 1,140,000 → 231 est. decay applied
-> RENEWAL 210 — SEAT 231 — REGION 242
-> RENEWAL 211 — SEAT 231 — REGION 219
-> ————————
-> SEAT EXCEEDS REGION AT 211.
-> *I have taken this to the Controller three times. It is not minuted because renewal is
-> not a decision. — A.P.*
+> ESTABLISHMENT RETURN — WEEK 2,707
+> INTAKE 1974: 412. OF WHOM LIVING: 118.
+> BORN AT THE SEAT: 1,176. OF WHOM LIVING: 881.
+> ESTABLISHMENT: 999.
+> EXPECTED: 1 (COTTER, R., DUE THURSDAY).
+> NOTE: ANNEX D IN FORCE AT 1,000.
+> *Controller — I have asked Centre what Annex D is for. Centre says it is for Thursday. — A.P.*
-**What it is for.** This is Revelation 5 in a player's hands. Note the last line: she has
-already tried, through the proper channel, and the proper channel is the problem.
+**What it is for.** Revelation 6 in a player's hands, with the date on it. The last line is
+Pennyfeather's own unease, and it is the cheapest way into Annex D.
+
+### SO-H05 — Centre Circular 26/33
+
+*A flimsy, franked with the circle and stroke. Arrives by pipe at Countdown step 2. The
+agents see it if they are in the Control Room, if Sowerby shows it to them, or if they take
+it from his desk.*
+
+> CENTRE TO SEAT 12. CIRCULAR 26/33.
+> UNACCOUNTED PERSONS AT THE SEAT ARE TO BE ENUMERATED OR REMOVED.
+> ENUMERATION IS PREFERRED.
+> THE ESTABLISHMENT WILL BE COMPLETE ON THURSDAY IN ANY CASE.
+> THE SEAT WILL SPEAK AT THE HOUR.
+> J. SMITH, FOR CENTRE.
+
+**What it is for.** Revelation 4, no roll: **the frank matches SO-H01's, and the name is the
+one on Vane's letter.** It is also the order that sends the wardens, and the word
+*enumerated* tells the table what detention really risks.
+
+### SO-H06 — Terms of engagement
+
+*A single typed sheet from the Bureau, signed by the Deputy Director. Give it in the
+briefing and let them keep it.*
+
+> CASE SO-012 — BELLHOUSE.
+> 1. The persons at the Seat are to be brought home. None is expendable.
+> 2. Force is authorised in self-defence only. You are guests in a functioning
+> administration and will conduct yourselves accordingly.
+> 3. You will not tell the Seat what it believes is untrue until you can replace it with
+> something it can file.
+> 4. Establish who has been corresponding with the Seat as Centre, and bring back
+> everything in his hand.
+> 5. The Seat is to be released under clause 4 of its Order. Read clause 6 first.
+
+**What it is for.** The brief, in writing, so that a table reaching for its weapons has
+already been told what that costs. Term 5 is a hint and it is meant to be one.
---
-## Act One — The Returns *(~45 min)*
+## Act One — The Crossing *(~45 min)*
-**Where:** Wetherlaw farm and the vent head on Sheldon Moor, a wet afternoon in
-September. **What it is for:** establish that the boundary is real, expanding, and has a
-door in it.
+**Where:** the Bureau, then Sheldon Moor at dusk, then the lobby of a place that is not on
+any map. **What it is for:** the job, the door, and the first test of the brief.
> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
-> *The ash starts about a mile before the farm. It lies on the verges and it does not
-> wash off in the rain, which has been falling on it for four years. Joan Wetherlaw meets
-> you at the gate with a yard brush in her hand and says: "You're not from the council."*
+> *Registry smells of floor polish and old paper. Mr Bewley has laid a single buff envelope
+> on the table between you as if it might go off. "This came out of my in-tray in May," he
+> says. "It was posted in 1974. And somebody answered it."*
### Hooks — how the table gets here
-Use whichever fits the group; all three are live and the department used all three.
+The department sends them. There is one brief and it is SO-H06. What each agent carries
+into it:
-⚠ **Whichever hook you use, the party meets Joan Wetherlaw.** Desk pass 3 took the grid
-reference and drove straight past the farm, which is what a professional team with a map
-does — and two of these three hooks let them, because only the second one involves her at
-all. Act One without her ran fifteen minutes short and had nobody in it, **and both of its
-Essential clues lost their stated failure case, which is "Joan points at it within the
-minute."**
+- **The return.** Bhattacharya's section logged SO-H01 when it surfaced. The frank is his
+ find.
+- **The dog.** Nkemdirim has a vet's referral from Bakewell: a farm dog came home from
+ Sheldon Moor coated in coal soot, from a moor with no chimney on it for fifty years.
+- **Mercy Draw.** If the table played THROUGH TRAIN, whoever asked Vane about Mr Smith is on
+ this case because they did. If not, Bewley has the file and the name anyway.
-**So she is at the farm when they arrive, and she walks up with them.** She has been
-walking up there for four years, which is precisely what the woman in her own NPC entry
-would do, and it means the forty-minute moor walk has somebody in it instead of being
-terrain. **A party who skip the farm entirely meet her at the vent head**, sitting on the
-concrete with a flask, and nothing else changes. Either way she is present for clues 1–5 and
-she goes no further than the adit mouth.
+### Beat 1 — The Bureau *(~10 min)*
-- **The return in Registry.** Bhattacharya's section has SO-H01 on a desk. It is
- fifty-two years old, it is answering a question nobody asked, and it arrived in May.
-- **The farm.** Joan Wetherlaw wrote to DEFRA about her yard in 2023 and was sent a
- leaflet. The letter reached the department by the route those letters take.
-- **The dog.** A veterinary practice in Bakewell submitted tissue it could not classify.
- It is on Nkemdirim's bench in the briefing, and it is nine days older than the animal.
+**Mr Bewley, Registry**, gives SO-H01 and SO-H06 and says, if asked:
+
+- **Bellhouse was RSG 12.** It was staffed for an exercise in November 1974 and the whole
+ intake is on the file as *not returned*. The file was closed in 1975 by an instruction
+ nobody can trace.
+- **There is no way in on the ground.** The adit is backfilled; the survey says so; three
+ engineers confirmed it in May. **The site is only reachable across.** The crossing is at
+ the vent head, and it opens at dusk when the moor cools and the warm air comes up.
+- **The frank.** *"I have seen this mark once before. It was on a letter of instruction in
+ the Mercy Draw file, signed Smith, in 1881."* He does not speculate. He wants the letters.
+
+**Mr Prosser, Stores**, lays out the 1974 issue. **Standing Order 9 is live**, and down there
+a modern object is also a question the wardens will ask:
+
+| Instead of | They get |
+|---|---|
+| handset | **nothing** — out of contact once across |
+| torch | **Home Office pattern hand lamp** |
+| service pistol | **service revolver**, issued, and Prosser asks them not to need it |
+| scanner | **a 1974 Geiger counter** — *"the one thing down there that might change a mind"* |
+| stab vest | **Civil Defence greatcoat** |
+| everything else | **warrant cards**, which are good in any year |
+
+### Beat 2 — Sheldon Moor *(~15 min)*
+
+> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
+> *The soot starts a mile before the farm. It lies black on the verges in the rain. Joan
+> Wetherlaw meets you at the gate with a yard brush and says: "You're not from the Coal
+> Board. They stopped coming in 1975."*
+
+**Joan is at the farm and walks up with them** — carried forward from v0.7's third desk
+pass, which drove straight past her and lost Act One's failure case. A party who skip the
+farm meet her at the vent head with a flask.
### Clue trail — Act One
| # | Clue | Where | How found | What it gives | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
-| 1 | The ash is not ash | The verges, the yard | `[CUS: Knowledge — it is not combustion product and it is not mineral; it has a grain structure, like something milled]` | The boundary is a *place*, not a contamination | Essential |
-| 2 | The ash has an edge | Walking the field boundary | `[CUS: Navigate — the line is straight for 400 m and then turns exactly 90°, which weather does not do]` | It is surveyed. Somebody drew it | Supporting |
-| 3 | The dog's records | Joan's kitchen, the vet's note | `[CUS: Insight — the vet's note is hedged in a way a vet's note never is; nine days of healing in an animal that was gone overnight]` | Time runs differently **in the ash**, not in the site | Supporting |
-| 4 | Joan's fifty-two years | Joan herself | `[CUS: Persuade — she has a box of her father's papers she has never shown anyone]` | Her father was a Sheldon works foreman in 1974 and was told to stop digging | Supporting |
-| 5 | The vent head | Sheldon Moor, 3/4 mile up | `[CUS: Spot — a mushroom vent in the heather, painted to lose itself, warm to the hand]` | The site is **live** — something down there is breathing | Essential |
-| 6 | The postal pipe | Beside the vent head | `[CUS: Repair (Mechanical) — a sealed 4-inch pneumatic line, pressurised, and the seal is 1974 and unbroken]` | The route in, and where SO-H01 came from | Essential |
-| 7 | The blast door | End of the service adit | `[CUS: Engineering (Field Systems) — it is not locked. It has never been locked. It opens from this side]` | Nobody built this to keep anyone out | Essential |
+| 1 | The frank | SO-H01, the briefing | `[CUS: no roll — Bewley points at it]` | The thread to Mercy Draw, and Mr Smith's name | Essential |
+| 2 | The soot is fresh | The verges, the yard | `[CUS: Knowledge — bituminous coal smoke, burned this week, from a moor with no chimney]` | Something below is burning coal *now* | Supporting |
+| 3 | The soot has an edge | The field boundary | `[CUS: Navigate — a straight line for 400 m and a right angle; it follows the old colliery lease, not the wind]` | The site's footprint is filed, not weathered | Supporting |
+| 4 | Joan's father's box | The farmhouse | `[CUS: Persuade — the colliery's closure notice, 1975, and an instruction to backfill the adit "by order of Centre", franked with the circle and stroke]` | The frank again, on the surface, in 1975 | Supporting |
+| 5 | The parcel | Joan herself | `[CUS: Insight — she is not frightened of the soot; she is frightened of the man who came in 2022 and asked her to sign for a parcel for Bellhouse]` | Mr Smith is still active above ground, and nobody can describe him — not even Joan, an hour after she tried | Supporting |
+| 6 | The vent head is breathing | Sheldon Moor | `[CUS: no roll — a painted mushroom vent in the heather, warm to the hand, smelling of a coal fire]` | Revelation 1 begins: something down there is alive | Essential |
-**Clues 1–5 share one failure case and it is deliberate: nothing out here is hidden.** On a
-failure the agent does not find it *yet*; Joan, who has lived with all of it for four years,
-points at it within the minute. She is not being mysterious. She has been trying to show
-somebody for four years. **A special** on any of them gets the same fact plus the detail
-that it has been like this since 2022 and not before.
+**Failure cases.** Clues 2–5 fail to *Joan points at it within the minute*; she has been
+trying to show somebody for decades. **The parcel (5) is the exception**: on a failure she
+does not mention it today, and the Act Two routes to Mr Smith do not need it.
-⚠ **Clues 6 and 7 are the exception, because Joan is not there.** She walks up to the vent
-head; she has never gone down the adit and she is not going to start. Desk pass 4 failed the
-blast door and the blanket rule named a woman standing four hundred metres behind them.
-**Their failure case is time, never access** — the postal pipe is pressurised and audible
-and the blast door is a door. Ten minutes of looking and both open. **Nothing in this
-scenario is gated on getting inside; the door has never been locked.**
-
-### The three beats
-
-1. **The yard.** Joan, the brush, the ash. She is sixty-seven, she is tired of not being
- believed, and she will talk for as long as anyone lets her.
- `[CUS: Insight — she is not frightened of the ash; she is frightened of being told
- again that there is nothing there]`. *Success:* she produces her father's box
- unprompted. *Failure:* she produces it anyway, later, when somebody is kind to her.
- Nothing is gated on this roll — it changes when, not whether.
-2. **The walk up.** Forty minutes of moor in the wet. Use it for the ash edge (clue 2) and
- for whatever the table wants to talk about. `[CUS: Athletics — average; only a fumble
- is a fall, and a fall here is a twisted ankle and nothing worse]`.
-3. **The vent head and the adit.** The way in. `[CUS: Stealth — they can be inside without
- being seen, which matters at Countdown step 2]`. **This roll buys *when* Teague finds
- them, and nothing else.** *Success:* Countdown step 2 moves to **+55 min** — they get
- most of Act Two before he appears. *Failure:* step 2 moves to **+15 min** and he is
- looking for them while they are still in the lobby. *Special:* he is not told at all
- until they introduce themselves. **All three stay inside the act**, which is the point —
- a Teague who arrives after Act Two has ended is a roll that bought nothing. The door opens either way; it has never been locked.
-
-### Time, ruled — because the table will ask in Act One
-
-Joan's dog healed nine days overnight. The lore-digger will immediately ask what an
-afternoon below costs them up here. **The answer is nothing.**
-
-**The ratio is in the ash, not in the site.** The boundary band is where the "after" is
-being written, and time inside *it* is thick — the dog lay in it for a night. The party
-crosses that band in thirty seconds, twice, and the site beyond it runs at 1:1 with the
-surface, because the site is a place with clocks in it that people have been winding for
-fifty-two years. Thursday is Thursday in both directions.
-
-**Say this when it is asked and do not leave it vague** — Act Three is on a deadline and a
-table that thinks time is elastic will not believe the deadline.
-
-> ⚠ **Do not put a fight in Act One.** The scenario has one creature above ground and it
-> is not here. If the table needs something to do with their hands, give them the adit:
-> it is four hundred metres of 1962 concrete and the lights still work.
----
-
-## Act Two — Bellhouse *(~75 min)*
-
-**Where:** the site. **What it is for:** the players meet a functioning civil service at
-the end of the world, and are shown the sum.
+### Beat 3 — The crossing *(~5 min)*
> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
-> *The corridor is warm and smells of floor polish and soup. A woman in a cardigan and a
-> department lanyard steps out of an office, sees four strangers, and says — with no alarm
-> whatever — "Oh, are you from Centre? Only we've been writing."*
+> *At dusk the warm air over the vent head goes wrong — not shimmering, creased, like a page
+> folded and opened again. Behind it, somewhere below you, a tannoy is announcing the evening
+> shift.*
+
+**Everybody crosses. Nobody rolls to cross.** A fumble on anything they do in the next
+minute costs 1 Coherence (*fumble on crossing*). They come out **inside**, in the lobby
+behind a blast door that has been shut since 1974. Joan does not come. She has never been
+further than the vent and she is not starting now.
+
+### Beat 4 — Enquiries *(~15 min)*
+
+> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
+> *The lobby is warm and smells of floor polish and soup. A man in a cardigan behind a
+> counter marked ENQUIRIES looks up from a ledger, looks at the blast door behind you, and
+> says, very carefully: "Name and section, please."*
+
+**Nobody has arrived since 1974.** There is a procedure for *unaccounted persons* and the
+clerk, **Mr Ogden**, follows it to the letter: he rings the Controller's Office, he offers
+them a seat, and he does not let them past the counter. **Teague and one warden** arrive in
+three minutes. Nobody is hostile yet. Everybody is frightened.
+
+**How they present themselves is the first test of SO-H06.**
+
+- **"We are from the Department."** Show a warrant card and it is **Borrowed Authority
+ inside scope**: 1 Trust, no roll, and the Seat accepts them as Department officers.
+ *It does not accept them as Centre's*, and Ogden says so: *"Centre didn't say."*
+- **"We are from Centre."** A cover story. `[CUS: Tradecraft — the Seat's own forms, the
+ right words, the right patience]`. *Success:* Sowerby sees them as visitors pending
+ verification. *Failure:* the lie is noticed at once, because Centre never sends anybody —
+ they are **held pending Centre's instruction**, which is Act Two's step 2 arriving early in
+ spirit.
+- **"There was no war."** Said to Ogden, it is filed and forwarded. Said to Teague, it is the
+ most dangerous sentence in the building — move Teague straight to hostile and play Act Two
+ with him following them.
+- **Modern kit on show.** Every item is a question, and a phone is a thing nobody below can
+ explain. **Panic trigger** for Ogden, not the agents.
+
+**Sowerby interviews them** in the Controller's Office to close the act.
+`[CUS: Persuade — he is courteous, lonely and procedural; give him something he can file and
+he will give them the run of the Seat with an escort]`. *Success:* **visitors pending
+verification**, escorted by a junior warden, and Sowerby writes to Centre about them.
+*Failure:* **held in the interview room** until Centre replies — Act Two opens with them
+confined, and the first scene is getting out of it (Kit Marlow brings the tea, and
+the door is not locked because nobody below has ever needed it locked). **Either way
+Sowerby writes to Centre**, and Centre answers at Countdown step 2.
+
+`[CUS: Insight — Sowerby is not suspicious of them; he is afraid of what Centre will say
+about them, and that is a stranger thing for a Controller to be afraid of]`
+
+> ⚠ **Do not put the fight in Act One.** Teague and one warden will not start anything at the
+> counter, and the harness agrees it would be no contest: against the four-player cut, that
+> pair detains the whole party in **4%** of fights.
+> The fight belongs to Act Two, when the detail is sent.
+
+---
+
+## Act Two — The Establishment *(~75 min)*
+
+**Where:** the Seat and the pit below it. **What it is for:** a thousand people, how they
+live, who has been writing to them, and what Thursday is.
+
+> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
+> *The main corridor is full. Shift change: overalls and cardigans, a child on somebody's
+> shoulders, a noticeboard with a housing list, a rota, and a poster for the Allotments
+> Show. Everybody looks at you, and then — because they were brought up to — everybody
+> looks politely away.*
### How to run the population
-**Nobody attacks. Nobody is suspicious. Everybody is delighted.** Fifty-two years of
-posting returns into a pipe and somebody has finally come. The agents will be offered
-tea within ninety seconds and it is real tea, rationed, and giving it to them costs
-somebody their allowance.
+**A council, not a bunker.** People queue, complain, minute things, and are kind. They offer
+tea. **Say this in three mouths over the act:** *Centre will tell us when.* It is the
+load-bearing line.
-**If they refuse the tea** — and a contrarian table will — **the offer is not withdrawn.**
-It is set down on the side, and it is still there, cold, when they come back through. Say
-nothing about it. Somebody gave up their allowance for it and nobody is going to mention
-that either.
+**Suspicion is procedural, not violent.** Nobody below attacks strangers; they report them.
+Every conversation the agents have is noted by somebody and reaches Sowerby within the
+hour. **The GM should mention the notes** — a warden writing in a pocketbook, a clerk on a
+telephone — so the detail in step 3 feels earned rather than sprung.
-**Say this three times over the act, in three different mouths:** *we were told Centre
-would come when it could.* That is the load-bearing line. They are not mad, or trapped,
-or cursed. They were told to hold on, and they held on.
+**The occult is never announced.** Six wrong things are placed below. **Show at least two
+before the detail arrives**; the table does the rest. If a player says *cult* out loud,
+nobody below understands the word.
-**The one instruction that matters:** if the GM feels the act sagging, do not introduce a
-threat. Introduce a *person* — the man who has run the site's library for forty years and
-wants to know whether the National Theatre reopened; the woman who is teaching children
-the geography of a county she has never stood in. The act's engine is grief, not danger.
+### When the players tell them the truth
-### When the players tell them the truth — and they will, in the first five minutes
+**To Sowerby.** He files it. *"I'd like that to be true. Centre says otherwise, and Centre
+has never been wrong about the readings."* **What moves him is not a fact but a hand**: put
+Mr Smith's letter beside the genuine 1974 Home Office paper in Marlow's file (clue 11c) and
+they are not the same office. That is his script break, and it is available from the moment
+they hold both.
-Desk pass 1's talker said *"Controller, there was no war"* four minutes into the act. This
-is the likeliest opening move at every table and it needs a printed answer, not a GM's
-improvisation.
+**To Pennyfeather.** She asks one question: *"Then who has been answering the post?"* This
+tips her from unease into action.
-**Told to Sowerby.** He is courteous, he does not believe it, and — this is the important
-part — **he files it.** A written statement from a Centre officer goes in the record, which
-means it is still there in Act Three when it matters. He says: *"I'd very much like that to
-be true. We had it put to us in 'seventy-nine by a man who'd got in through the
-ventilation. He believed it as well."* **He is not lying and there was such a man.** Do not
-resolve who.
-
-**Told to Pennyfeather.** She goes quiet, then asks one question: *"Then what has the
-region been doing?"* She already suspects — this is what tips her from arithmetic into
-action, and it is the cheapest way to get SO-H03 into their hands if the Insight route was
-missed.
-
-**Told to Teague.** **This is what makes him dangerous**, and the GM should know it before
-it happens. Everything in his Act Three paragraph arrives early, without the signing to
-contain it. If they tell him in Act Two, move Countdown step 2 to *now* and play the rest
-of the act with him following them.
-
-**Taking a resident to the surface.** They will ask. **The answer is yes, it works, and it
-is the worst thing they can do before Act Three.** A resident who crosses the ash sees a
-moor with no craters on it, and one of three things happens — GM's choice by who it is:
-
-- **Sowerby** looks for a long time and says *"I'll need to see the region."* He is asking
- for proof of a million people, and nobody can give it to him inside the session.
-- **Larkhall** believes it instantly, because she is a scientist and a sky is evidence, and
- is then **no use to anybody for the rest of the case.**
-- **Teague** decides it is an anomaly and not a sky, and goes back down certain. **Do not
- use him for this unless the table insists** — it removes the script break.
-
-⚠ **Nobody is harmed by crossing.** There is no trap here. The scenario is not punishing
-the humane move; it is showing that proof does not solve an administrative problem.
-
-**And if they bring proof back down instead** — a photograph, a newspaper, a phone — desk
-pass 3 did exactly this and the text had no answer. It does now, and it is Sowerby's, and
-he is kind about it: *"That's a photograph of a moor with nothing on it. I've got four
-hundred of those in the survey file."* **A picture of an uncratered hillside is a picture
-of somewhere else**, and the man has spent fifty-two years administering a region he has
-never seen on the strength of documents. One more document does not move him. **What moves
-him is an order.**
+**Taking a resident to the surface.** The crossing works both ways at dusk. **Do not let it
+solve the case**: a resident who sees an uncratered moor sees *a* moor, and Centre's readings
+say the region is poisoned beyond sight. Sowerby: *"That is a photograph of a hillside. I have
+four hundred of those."* **The Geiger counter is different**: it reads clean below and
+clean above, and it is 1974 equipment, and Kowalczyk or Larkhall can vouch for it.
+`[CUS: Repair (Electronics) — prove to a Seat engineer that the counter is sound]`.
+*Success* gives Sowerby a reading he cannot file under Centre's — a dossier item for Act
+Three.
### Locations below
| Location | What is there | Why the players come here |
|---|---|---|
-| **The blast door and lobby** | A visitor book, opened 1974, three entries, all from that week | First proof anybody has ever thought about the outside |
-| **The Control Room** | Sowerby, the tannoy, the regional map with 1974 pins | The broadcast (Countdown 1); the man who signs |
-| **Registry** | Pennyfeather, the establishment returns, fifty-two years of files | **The sum** — the act's destination |
-| **The sick bay** | Dr Ivy Larkhall; Edith Marlow, 101, in the end bed | Revelation 3 — it was a drill |
-| **The crèche and school** | Nineteen children under eleven; Kit Marlow, 17, teaching them | The cost of Act Three, made a person |
-| **The pipe room** | The pneumatic head, the outgoing tray, fifty-two years of unanswered post | Where SO-H01 came from; Kowalczyk's route to Revelation 4 |
-| **The plant floor** | Generators, the renewal relay, Teague's office | How the renewal physically happens |
+| **Lobby and Enquiries** | Ogden, the ledger, the blast door | Arrival; the visitor book with three 1974 entries and one in 2026 |
+| **Control Room and studio** | Sowerby, the tannoy, the regional map, **the studio safe** | The bulletin; Centre's letters; **the tape** |
+| **Registry** | Pennyfeather, fifty-two years of files, the census in the stacks | **Annex D** and the Establishment |
+| **Sick bay and maternity** | Dr Ivy Larkhall; Edith Marlow, 101; Ruth Cotter, due | Revelation 3; the dream |
+| **Crèche and school** | Nineteen under-elevens; Kit Marlow, 17, teaching them | The drawings; the intercom |
+| **Pipe room** | The pneumatic head; Centre's in-tray | SO-H05; the frank |
+| **Vigil hall** | The site's chapel-that-is-not, rows of chairs, a lectern | The Reading of the Region |
+| **The Allotments** | Coal galleries under sodium lamps; trout tanks; hens | How a thousand people eat |
+| **Buffer Depot** | Stores, the issue book, a quartermaster | Stock *received from Centre* |
+| **Plant floor** | Boilers, the coal face, **the transmitter rack** | The mast feed |
+| **The Sump** | The old sough-side cells, dry, clean, rarely used | Where the detail takes them |
### Clue trail — Act Two
| # | Clue | Where | How found | What it gives | Type |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
-| 8 | They think it happened | Anywhere, first ten minutes | `[CUS: no roll — the tannoy bulletin does it for you]` | Revelation 2 | Essential |
-| 9 | The visitor book | The lobby | `[CUS: Spot — three signatures in one week in 1974 and nothing after]` | Nobody has ever come back | Supporting |
-| 10 | The order itself | Registry, on request | `[CUS: Research — SO-H02, filed where it should be, because everything here is]` | Clause 4's second door | Essential |
-| 11 | The drill | The sick bay, from Marlow | `[CUS: Insight — she is not confused, she is ashamed, and those present differently]` | Revelation 3 | Essential |
-| 11b | CASUALTIES NIL | Registry, from Pennyfeather | `[CUS: Insight — ask her what week one looked like and she fetches the 1974 return]` | Revelation 3, by a second road | Essential |
-| 11c | Marlow's file | The sick-bay day room | `[CUS: Research — a box of her papers on the shelf where the ward keeps its old files]` | Revelation 3, in her own hand | Essential |
-| 12 | The relay | Plant floor | `[CUS: Repair (Electronics) — the renewal is wired to a relay that also drives the perimeter survey]` | Revelation 4: renewal *is* the expansion | Essential |
-| 13 | The sum | Registry, from Pennyfeather | `[CUS: no roll — ask her a straight question and she produces SO-H03; she has been waiting fifty-two years to be asked one]` | Revelation 5 | Essential |
-| 13b | What she did about it | Registry, from Pennyfeather | `[CUS: no roll — it is written at the bottom of SO-H03 in her own hand, and she will say it aloud to anybody who reads that line]` | *Why* the proper channel failed | Supporting |
-| 13c | The establishment return | Anywhere, Countdown step 3 | `[CUS: Spot — she posts the population count herself and the number is on the front of it]` | Revelation 5, by a second road | Essential |
-| 14 | Sixty-one | Registry, the birth register | `[CUS: Research — sixty-one born below, no NHS number, no birth certificate above ground]` | The cost of cancellation | **Supporting** |
-| 15 | What Teague has decided | Plant floor, or he finds them | `[CUS: Listen — he asks each of them separately where they were on the day]` | He is testing a theory he cannot afford to be wrong about | Supporting |
+| 7 | They think it happened | Anywhere | `[CUS: no roll — the bulletin does it]` | Revelation 2 | Essential |
+| 8 | The response | The bulletin | `[CUS: Listen — nine hundred and ninety-nine people say the same six words at the same pace, and the children say them best]` | Revelation 5 (a) | Supporting |
+| 9 | The Order | Registry | `[CUS: no roll — Pennyfeather supplies SO-H02 to anyone who asks for the Order; it is filed where it should be]` | Clauses 4 and 6, and Annex D | Essential |
+| 10 | Centre's hand | Pipe room or Control Room | `[CUS: no roll — SO-H05, at Countdown step 2]` | Revelation 4 | Essential |
+| 10b | The Controller's file | Sowerby's desk | `[CUS: Research — fifty-two years of Centre letters, all in one hand, all franked; the early ones are Home Office typescript, then from 1974 they are not]` | Revelation 4, by a second road | Essential |
+| 11 | The stranger | Sick bay, from Marlow | `[CUS: Insight — she is not confused, she is ashamed, and when she is asked kindly about November 1974 she says "he said, then it had better be"]` | Revelation 3 | Essential |
+| 11b | CASUALTIES NIL | Registry | `[CUS: no roll — Pennyfeather fetches the week-one return for anyone who asks what the first week was like; it is SO-H01's twin]` | Revelation 3, by a second road | Essential |
+| 11c | Marlow's file | Sick-bay day room | `[CUS: Research — her box on the shelf with the ward files: the genuine 1974 exercise order on Home Office paper, whose Annex D says only that the Seat broadcasts a Home Office address, and her note: "I knew. I signed."]` | Revelation 3 in her hand, **and the dossier item that breaks Sowerby** | Essential |
+| 12 | The dream | Sick bay, from Larkhall | `[CUS: Insight — ask her what is wrong with the born-below and she shows you her unpublished paper: eight hundred and eighty-one people, one dream]` | Revelation 5 (b) | Supporting |
+| 13 | The drawings | Crèche | `[CUS: no roll — Kit shows them the children's pictures of the sun; every one is a circle with a stroke through the top]` | Revelation 5 (c), and the frank again | Supporting |
+| 13b | The intercom | Crèche | `[CUS: Listen — the speaker is wired to the studio, not the Control Room; Kit says it plays at three in the morning]` | The tape is played to the children nightly | Essential |
+| 13c | The establishment return | Registry board, Countdown step 4 | `[CUS: no roll — SO-H03 is posted where anyone can read it]` | Revelation 6, with the date | Essential |
+| 14 | The Reading | Vigil hall, Countdown step 5 | `[CUS: Occult — it is not a gazetteer, it is a litany; the last names are the kind a far side answers to]` | Revelation 5 (d) | Supporting |
+| 15 | Received from Centre | Buffer Depot | `[CUS: Knowledge — twenty years of stock ran out in 1996; thirty years of ninety-day issues since, and nothing that size fits a four-inch pipe]` | Revelation 5 (e): Centre feeds them | Supporting |
+| 16 | The Allocations | Registry | `[CUS: Research — the Continuity Scheme's register, "per Centre guidance", steering births toward one number]` | Revelation 5 (f) | Supporting |
+| 17 | The tape | Studio | `[CUS: Research — the studio log: RECONSTITUTION ADDRESS 12/R, REVISED, RECEIVED FROM CENTRE 2019; and a line nobody has queried: PLAYED NIGHTLY, CRÈCHE, INTERVAL SIGNAL ONLY]` | Revelation 6: where the Address is, and that it is Centre's | Essential |
+| 18 | The feed | Plant floor | `[CUS: Repair (Electronics) — the transmitter valves are warmed every day, and the feeder runs up the old shaft to a mast that is still on the moor]` | The Address can reach the region | Essential |
-**Failure cases. A failed roll on a filed clue costs a SCENE, not ten minutes.** This is
-the most orderly place in the world and nothing here is lost — but desk pass 4 measured what
-the old rule did to the clock. Act Two asks for six rolls whose failure case was *"ten
-minutes and a second attempt"*, roughly two of them fail in an average session, and **a
-single failure handed back ten of the nineteen minutes the Pacing Note had just cut.** The
-cuts were sized against the act's length and not against its variance, so they could not
-hold.
+**Revelation 6 has four roads and none is gated on a single roll:** Annex D itself (9, no
+roll), the return (13c, no roll), the studio log (17), and the feed (18). **The table needs
+the Annex and one of the others.** If they reach the end of the act with only the Annex,
+Pennyfeather says it for them: *"Annex D says those who hear it are entered. I always thought
+it meant we'd write them down."*
-**So:** a failed Research or Insight on clue 10 or 14 means **Pennyfeather goes and fetches
-it while the party are doing something else**, and it arrives a scene later. The roll still
-mattered — they did not get it when they wanted it, and they owe her — and it costs nothing
-on the clock. **Never make the table stand in Registry waiting.** Clue 12 failed means the relay reads as ordinary plant and Revelation 4 arrives
-instead from Pennyfeather, one scene later.
+**Revelation 3 has three roads**, carried forward from v0.7 exactly: Marlow (11), which is
+allowed to close; Pennyfeather (11b), which cannot; the file (11c), in a room they have a
+reason to be in. **All three failed means the Vigil gives it to them.**
-⚠ **Revelation 5 is not behind a roll at all, and that is the fix.** Desk pass 3's
-contrarian split put the wrong agent in Registry — Insight 40 instead of 63 — and one
-failed roll lost the sum, so the party cancelled the Standing Order having never learned
-why it was urgent. **Pennyfeather's own roster entry already said she hands SO-H03 to
-anybody who asks her a straight question, and the clue said to roll Insight; those could
-not both be true.** The roster line wins: she gives it to anyone who asks. Desk pass 4 then
-lost **13b** the same way on a 98, so that came off the dice too — it is written at the
-bottom of her own sheet. **13c is a second road for a table that never thinks to ask her
-anything**: she posts the establishment return at Countdown step 3 whether or not anybody is
-talking to her, and the number is on the front.
+**Failure cases. A failed roll on a filed clue costs a scene, not the clue** — carried forward
+from v0.7's fourth desk pass. A failed Research is Pennyfeather or a clerk fetching it while
+the party does something else. **Clue 18 failed** means the rack reads as ordinary plant and
+Kowalczyk hears about the mast from the plant foreman a scene later. **Clue 13b failed**
+means Kit mentions the three o'clock tone in passing, without the wiring.
-⚠ **Revelation 3 has three independent routes, and this is deliberate.** Desk pass 1 failed
-the roll with Marlow *and* the fallback with Larkhall, and the party finished the case
-never learning it was a drill — because the only route left was a file in Marlow's private
-quarters that nothing had told them existed. **A fallback that requires the revelation it
-is a fallback for is not a fallback.** So:
-
-- **11 · Marlow herself.** Fail and she does not say it today; she is old and ashamed and
- there is no second attempt. **This route is allowed to close.**
-- **11b · Pennyfeather.** She has the 1974 return in a drawer and *casualties this period:
- nil* is on it. She fetches it for anybody who asks what week one was like. **This route
- cannot close** — she is helpful, and she is already the act's destination.
-- **11c · The file, in the sick-bay day room** rather than in private quarters. They have a
- reason to be there (it is where Larkhall talks to them) and a reason to look at a shelf
- of old ward files.
-
-**If all three somehow fail, give it to them at the Vigil (Countdown step 4):** somebody
-reads the 1974 roll of honour aloud, and there are no names on it.
-
-⚠ **Clue 14 is Supporting on purpose, and it used to be Essential.** Desk pass 3 failed it
-and the case got *better*: the sixty-one arrived in Pennyfeather's mouth at the moment of
-decision instead of in a register an hour earlier, and it was devastating. **Do not steer
-the party into the birth register.** If they find it, fine. If they do not, she tells them
-when it counts.
-
-**Specials.** A special on clue 11 gets Marlow's own memo in her hand — the fortnight
-paragraph, the single most damning object in the case.
-
-⚠ **Neither 13 nor 13b is behind a roll, on purpose.** The sum is the destination of the act
-and the reason the proper channel failed is the thematic centre of the whole case, and desk
-passes 3 and 4 lost one of them each to an ordinary failed die. **Pennyfeather hands over
-SO-H03 to anyone who asks her a straight question, and the line about taking it to the
-Controller three times is written at the bottom of it in her own hand.** What a good Insight
-buys — at the GM's discretion, no roll called for — is her saying the thing she has never
-said aloud: *I think we should not be here.*
+**Revelation 5 is the table's to build.** Bhattacharya's Occult 63 is the one sheet that
+names it: `[CUS: Occult — any two of the six wrong things, put side by side, are the same
+procedure; it is an enrolment, and it has been running for decades]`. *Failure* is not a
+lost clue; it is a lost *name*. The table can still act on what it has seen.
### The census, in the Registry
-There is one creature in this act and it is in the stacks behind Pennyfeather's desk,
-counting. **It has been counting for fifty-two years and it is nearly finished.**
+**It has been counting for fifty-two years and it has reached nine hundred and
+ninety-nine.** It is in the stacks behind Pennyfeather's desk.
`[CUS: Spot — something between the shelves is keeping a tally, and the tally is people]`
-It does not attack. It **counts** — one round, no roll, it simply looks — and an agent it
-has counted is on a list on the far side for good. See the bestiary entry; the department
-cannot get anybody off that list.
+It does not attack. **When it counts an agent — one round, no roll, it simply looks — that
+agent is ENUMERATED** (see the bestiary): on a list on the far side for good. **Here it also
+means they are on the Establishment**, and an enumerated agent who hears the Address in Act
+Three is enrolled with no resistance roll.
-**This is the scenario's one cheap lesson and it should be cheap:** the players will want
-to fight it. Fighting it is legal and survivable. It changes nothing about Thursday,
-because the tally is not the cause of the sum — it is a symptom of the same filing. Let
-them learn that by doing it.
+**Tell the table what just happened when it happens.** It is optional and it is cheap, and
+it is the clearest way to make SO-H05's word *enumerated* mean something.
-> ⚠ **Do not let the census kill the act's tone.** It is two minutes of cold in a warm
-> place. Get back to the tea.
+### The detention — Countdown step 3
-⚠ **The census is optional and missing it costs nothing.** Desk pass 1 failed the Spot and
-never found it, and no later beat noticed. It is atmosphere and a cheap lesson, not a clue
-— do not give it a second route and do not steer the party into the stacks. **If the act is
-running hot, it is the first thing to lose.**
+SO-H05 tells Sowerby to enumerate or remove. **He chooses enumeration**, because it is
+preferred and it sounds like paperwork. He sends **Teague and a detail of wardens** to bring
+the agents to Registry to be entered.
+
+> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
+> *Teague comes round the corner with his hat on and three men behind him, and he is holding
+> his truncheon the way a man holds something he hopes not to use. "The Controller asks you to
+> come to Registry," he says. "I'm asked to say it's a formality. I'd like you to come
+> quietly. I'll ask you twice."*
+
+**Scale the detail to the table.** Four players: **Teague and three wardens**. Six players:
+**Teague and five.** Their sheets are in the compendium; the wardens are one actor.
+
+**What the fight is, measured.** The harness ran each detail 2,000 times against this
+scenario's declared cast. It does not model restraint, so read the detention figures as
+sound and the death figures as a ceiling — the fight with nobody holding back and nobody
+treating the fallen, which is not the fight the wardens are ordered to have.
+
+| Detail | Against | Agents hurt | Agents down | Whole party detained | Deaths *(ceiling)* |
+|---|---|---|---|---|---|
+| Teague and three | the four-player cut | **3.5** | **2.89** | **60.3%** | **1.31** |
+| Teague and three | the declared six | **2.71** | **1.16** | **0.3%** | **0.59** |
+| Teague and five | the declared six | **4.75** | **3.51** | **15.7%** | **2.07** |
+
+**What that means at the table.** The four-player cut has no fighter in it and **loses this
+fight more often than it wins it.** The six have Okonkwo and win it — and a win is a
+corridor of beaten neighbours, which SO-H06 forbids and which ends every conversation below.
+**Either way the fight is the worst option, and the brief already said so.**
+
+**The ways through, all live:**
+
+- **Go quietly.** They are walked to Registry to be entered. **This is the real jeopardy**
+ — see *In Registry* below.
+- **Talk it down.** `[CUS: Persuade — Teague is asking to be given a reason; a Department
+ warrant and a straight account are a reason]`. *Success:* he escorts them instead of
+ detaining them, and reports that they came willingly.
+- **The script break.** Say **Nell**. His daughter is nine and in the crèche, and anybody
+ who has been there knows her name. He stands the detail down and becomes their strongest
+ voice below. `[CUS: Insight — he is not threatening anyone; he is asking to be argued out
+ of it]` tells them to try.
+- **Run.** `[CUS: Stealth — through the Allotments galleries, where the lamps hum and
+ nobody looks up]`. *Success:* they are loose until Act Three and wanted. *Failure:* they
+ are cornered at the Sump gate and it becomes the fight or the quiet walk.
+- **Fight.** It is legal and it is measured above. **Panic trigger** at the first agent down.
+ A warden stops hitting a downed agent and cuffs them. **Every resident who saw it stops
+ helping.** Larkhall treats the injured on both sides, without being asked.
+
+**In Registry.** Pennyfeather has the pen. **Entering them takes the establishment past a
+thousand before Thursday** — she has read Annex D and she does not like it.
+
+- **If they have treated her as a person** — asked her a straight question, told her the
+ truth, or brought her SO-H01's query — **she stalls with no roll.** She finds the form is
+ the wrong one. She needs Centre's reference. It is teatime.
+- **Otherwise** `[CUS: Persuade — ask her not to, and tell her why]`. *Failure:* she enters
+ them, and each entered agent is **on the Establishment** exactly as if the census had
+ counted them.
+- **Then the Sump.** Held agents wait in the dry cells by the drainage level. It costs **one
+ scene**: Teague lets them out after the Nell break, or Kit brings the key, or
+ `[CUS: Repair (Mechanical) — a 1962 lock, and nobody has oiled it since]`.
---
-## Act Three — Renewal *(~50 min)*
+## Act Three — The Address *(~50 min)*
-**Where:** the Control Room, Thursday, 06:00. **What it is for:** the decision, and its
-price.
+**Where:** the Vigil hall at 06:00 Thursday, then the studio and the plant floor. **What it
+is for:** the order of operations — silence the Address, then let them go.
> *Read aloud or paraphrase:*
-> *Sowerby has shaved. The renewal folder is squared to the edge of the desk, the pen is
-> the one his predecessor used, and there are eleven people standing along the back wall
-> because they always come. He looks up and says: "You'll want to watch. It's quite short."*
+> *The whole Seat is in the Vigil hall. Sowerby has shaved. He reads Centre's renewal aloud,
+> as Controllers have done two hundred and eight times, and his voice changes at the last line:
+> "Establishment complete on issue. Annex D is in force. The Seat will speak at the hour."
+> Down the corridor, a baby starts to cry.*
-⚠ **Pennyfeather is in this room and she stays in it.** She is the Registrar, she files the
-renewal, and she is the only person present who knows what cancellation costs. Desk pass 1
-put the decision in the Control Room while she was two corridors away in Registry, and the
-party cancelled the order without ever being told about the sixty-one — which left the GM
-choosing between teleporting her in and letting them choose blind. **Neither is acceptable.
-Put her at the Controller's elbow from the first line of the act.**
+**Ruth Cotter's child is the thousandth.** If the census or Pennyfeather already put the
+agents on the Establishment, the thousand was reached yesterday and the baby is simply a
+baby. **Either way Annex D is in force, and at 07:00 — the session's 2:45 — Sowerby goes to
+the studio to broadcast.** He believes he is telling the region the Seat is coming up.
-### The three endings, all real
+### What has to happen, in order
-**1. CANCEL — clause 4, the warrant in the room.**
-Any agent may cancel the Standing Order in person. There is no roll. It works, it has
-always worked, and it is what a warrant card is *for*.
+**1. Silence the Address.** Three ways, any one of them enough:
-- **What happens:** the "after" un-files. Region 12 was never attacked, and Bellhouse was
- never executed. The 206 who went down in 1974 become people who went down for a drill
- and came up on the Friday.
-- **The cost, and do not soften it:** the sixty-one born below have no record above
- ground and never had one. **They stop.** Kit Marlow stops.
-- ⚠ **This must be said out loud, by Pennyfeather, before the pen moves.** Not in a GM
- aside and not after the fact. She says: *"Sixty-one of us were born here. I have their
- entries in front of me and there is no other copy. I want you to say the number back to
- me before you do it."* **If the agent cancels anyway, that is the scenario working.**
- What it must never be is a surprise afterwards.
-- ⚠ **If they never got the sum, they are cancelling for the wrong reason, and that is
- fine.** Desk pass 3's party never learned about the reconciliation threshold and
- cancelled anyway, because the amendment had failed and the warden had thrown them out.
- **Do not withhold the ending from them and do not have anybody explain first.** Afterwards
- — only afterwards — Pennyfeather works out what they prevented, and tells them, and she
- is the only person who will ever know. **A party who do the right thing by accident is the
- best possible ending for a case about people doing the wrong thing correctly.**
-- **Coherence:** the cancelling agent spends **2 Coherence**, permanently, because they
- are the authority that makes it true and reality now records them that way.
+- **The tape.** It is in the studio safe; Sowerby has the key on his chain.
+ - **He hands it over** if his script break has landed: Marlow's genuine 1974 order beside
+ Centre's letters (11c + 10b). No roll. He opens the safe himself and asks them not to
+ play it.
+ - `[CUS: Repair (Mechanical) — a 1962 Chubb safe; a special opens it in a minute, a
+ success in ten, a failure costs the scene]`.
+ - `[CUS: Tradecraft — take the key off his chain while he reads the renewal]`.
+ - **Destroying it** is easy once held: the studio's bulk eraser, or fire.
+- **The feed.** On the plant floor. `[CUS: Repair (Electronics) — pull the output valves and
+ the transmitter is a cabinet of warm glass]`. *Failure:* the rack is live and the attempt
+ costs a scene. `[CUS: Demolition — cut the feeder where it enters the shaft]` works on a
+ failure too, loudly, and the plant foreman will not forgive it.
+- **The Annex.** A **Borrowed Authority** stretch — the credential is Ellerby-Stannard, one
+ tier beyond scope because he is dead. `[CUS: Anomaly Lore — Annex D as it stands was never
+ drafted by the Home Office, and a correction of a 1974 clerical error restores the 1962 text]` at −20
+ per red flag broken. *Success:* **Centre's Annex D was never part of the order**; the tape is a tape. **The dossier buys scope, not the roll** — carried forward from v0.7's second desk
+ pass:
-**2. LET IT RENEW.**
-Sowerby signs. Nothing visibly happens. Then the correction begins, and the **overwriter**
-arrives to perform it — five bodies, correcting one fact the party relies on every round,
-retroactively and truly. It is not *trying* to fight anybody. It is doing the filing.
-
-⚠ **This is not a fight and the party cannot stop it by force. Say so.** Desk pass 2 ran it
-through the real harness: one of them cannot meaningfully hurt anybody, five of them ground
-for forty rounds and finished nothing, and the party experienced the end of the world as an
-inconclusive scuffle. Each body destroyed slows the corrections by 10% and that is the
-entire return on shooting it. **The threat is THE CORRECTION and the dice will not deliver
-one word of it — the GM has to.**
-
-**The four corrections, in order. Read them; do not improvise at the climax.**
-
-1. **The adit is not where they left it.** It never was. The way they came in comes out
- four hundred metres further down the moor, and always has.
-2. **The warrant card names somebody else.** Hand the card back to its player and tell
- them the name on it. It has always been that name. *(Use the agent who has spent the
- least Coherence — they have the furthest to fall.)*
-3. **There was never a dog.** Joan Wetherlaw has always lived alone, and the tissue on
- Nkemdirim's bench is a sheep's, and the vet's note is in a hand nobody recognises.
-4. **Bellhouse has always had two hundred and thirty-two people in it.** Let the table do
- the arithmetic themselves. Then tell whichever agent is standing nearest the wall that
- one of them is wearing their coat.
-
-**After the fourth, stop.** The case is over and the region is being corrected; anything
-further is the GM enjoying it, and this ending is not for enjoying.
-
-- **What happens:** Region 12 is corrected to match the record. This is the end of the
- world and the scenario does not flinch from letting the table choose it.
-- **This option must stay available.** A choice with one acceptable answer is not a choice
- and the players will smell it.
-
-**3. AMEND — the arrangement, and the best ending in the case.**
-The order does not have to be cancelled. Its **scope** can be changed. Bellhouse governs
-*Region 12 after the war*; amend the scope so that it governs somewhere genuinely empty
-and always was, and the site keeps running, the people keep existing, and the ash stops.
-
-This is a **Borrowed Authority** problem and is run by those rules:
-
-- **The credential is Ellerby-Stannard**, who is dead, which is why it is a stretch rather
- than routine — one tier beyond scope.
-- **It is assembled from up to three dossier items, each a separate scene, using a
- different skill, at most one of them at a keyboard.** The three that exist here:
- - Marlow's own memo `[CUS: Research — her hand, her reasoning, in the sick-bay day room]`
- - The 1962 commissioning survey naming an unpopulated alternate seat area
- `[CUS: Knowledge — Sheldon was the second choice; the first had nobody on it]`
- - Pennyfeather's counter-signature as Registrar `[CUS: Persuade — she has been waiting
- fifty-two years for somebody to ask her to do something about it]`
-- **The roll:** `[CUS: Anomaly Lore — the amendment has to be filed as a correction of a
- 1974 clerical error, which is what it is]`, at −20 per red flag broken. Each dossier
- item makes the credential better, never the roll easier.
-- **Success — and what the dossier bought.** ⚠ **The number of dossier items does not
- change this roll and never did.** Borrowed Authority is explicit: items make the
- *credential* better, not the roll easier. Desk pass 2 assembled one item of three and
- rolled exactly the same 62 against 63 it would have rolled with all three, which made
- the act's best three scenes mechanically invisible. **So the items buy scope. Same roll,
- three different worlds:**
-
- | Items | What the amendment grants |
+ | Items | What the correction grants |
|---|---|
- | **One** | **Narrow.** Bellhouse keeps running and the ash stops by the weekend — but the scope covers the *ground*, not the people. The site stays sealed. Nobody ever comes up, and the sixty-one stay unrecorded |
- | **Two** | **The seal lifts.** The order no longer requires the Seat to stay under it. They can come up, and some of them do, and Sowerby is not among the first |
- | **Three** | **The sixty-one get records.** Kit Marlow can leave, and there is a birth certificate with her name on it dated 2009, and reality has always had one |
+ | **One** | Annex D reverts to its 1962 wording — a Home Office address that enters nobody. **The tape still exists** and the enumerated are still on the list |
+ | **Two** | As one, and **the crèche intercom goes silent**; the dream stops for the youngest |
+ | **Three** | As two, and **the Establishment is only a headcount again** — nobody below is enrolled in anything |
- Read the row they earned. **Do not read the better one because it is kinder.**
-- **Failure:** the amendment does not take. **Do not fall straight through.** Sowerby's
- pen stops *above the paper* and stays there for one full round of table talk — he has
- been handed a reason to hesitate and he is a man who has never been allowed one. Play
- that silence. Pennyfeather says *"Controller."*
- - **If Teague stood down**, he says nothing and does not leave.
- - **If Teague did not** — if he threw them out, or they fought him, or they told him the
- truth in Act Two and he has been against them since — **he is in the doorway, he has
- won, and he does not look like a man who has won.** Desk pass 3 failed the script break
- and the beat lost its second voice; this is that voice. He says nothing either. The
- difference is what the players can see on him.
- **Then** the renewal proceeds unless somebody cancels under clause 4. Desk pass 1 fell
- through in ninety seconds and resolved a fifty-minute act in eight, because the failure
- state is so much worse than the alternative that nobody deliberated. **The pause is what
- makes it a decision rather than a reflex — it is not optional staging.**
-- **Coherence:** widening a scope with Coherence is legal here and it always works. It
- costs 1 per widening and the agent's file and Bellhouse's converge one step. Nothing in
- this game converges them back. **A table one item short can buy the next row up this
- way**, and should be told the price before they spend it, not after.
+ The items: Marlow's file (11c), the Geiger counter reading Sowerby could not file, and
+ Pennyfeather's counter-signature `[CUS: Persuade — she has wanted to sign something against
+ Annex D since she read it]`.
-**What the good ending actually looks like, to read at the table.** Desk pass 2 earned this
-ending and found it was three sentences long — less scenario than the failure branch got.
-It is what the whole case is for, so play it out:
+**2. Let them go.** Clause 4: any agent holding a warrant cancels the order in person. **No
+roll. It works. The cancelling agent spends 2 Coherence**, permanently, because they are the
+authority that makes it true.
-> *Sowerby reads the amendment twice. He asks one question — "and the region?" — and
-> Pennyfeather says "not ours any more, Controller," and he puts the pen down without
-> signing the renewal, which is the first time in fifty-two years anybody has done that.*
+- ⚠ **Clause 6 sends the Seat up under Annex D.** Cancel with the Address still live and
+ Sowerby broadcasts *at once*, not at 07:00. **Say this out loud if a player reaches for the
+ warrant first** — SO-H06 term 5 already told them to read clause 6.
+- **Or Sowerby withholds the renewal himself**, if his script break landed and they ask him
+ to. It is the first decision he has ever been allowed to make, and it releases them without
+ costing anybody Coherence. **This is the best version of the release and it is his, not
+ theirs.**
-Then, in this order, because the order is the point:
+**What release costs, said plainly.** Eight hundred and eighty-one people born below have no
+record above ground. **They do not vanish** — the department is here to bring them home, and
+they are real. But they come up without names on anything, and the only record of them is
+Pennyfeather's register. **If the register comes up with them, they have lives. If it does
+not, the department spends a decade proving they exist.** Pennyfeather will carry it herself
+if anyone asks her to.
-1. **The tannoy.** He broadcasts it himself, because he broadcasts everything. Two hundred
- and thirty-one people hear that the war is over in the only sense that was ever going
- to be available to them.
-2. **Nobody cheers.** Give the table the silence. These people have been *right* for
- fifty-two years and have just been told they were right about the wrong thing.
-3. **Pennyfeather files it**, because it is not real until it is filed, and she is the one
- who has always known that.
-4. **Then the row they earned, above.** If the seal lifted, somebody goes up. Let it be
- Larkhall, and let her not say anything at all.
-5. **The ash.** By the weekend Joan Wetherlaw sweeps her yard and it stays swept. **She is
- the last image of the case** — she does not know what happened and nobody will ever
- tell her, and she goes inside.
+### If the Address goes out
+
+At 07:00 the bell tone plays on the tannoy and on a mast on Sheldon Moor. **The Address is
+eleven minutes long** and it works on anyone who hears it to the end.
+
+- **Any agent in earshot** resists with POW×5; *failure* costs **1 Coherence** and they are
+ enrolled — they hold, they count, they answer — until the case is closed and the debrief
+ can get them back. **Enumerated agents do not roll.** **Panic trigger** for every agent who
+ hears the tone.
+- **It can still be stopped.** Eleven minutes is enough to reach the plant floor from the
+ studio. The feed at `[CUS: Repair (Electronics) — with the rack live and under load]` −20,
+ or the feeder with Demolition, or the tape pulled from the machine by hand in the studio
+ with Sowerby between them and it. **Stopped before the end, it has enrolled only the
+ building.**
+- **If it finishes,** the **overwriter** arrives to correct the region to match the record.
+ It is not a fight — see the bestiary — and the harness cannot deliver its threat; the GM
+ must. **Read these four corrections, in order, then stop:**
+ 1. **Joan Wetherlaw says "We hold."** She says it on the phone to the Bureau, and then she says the other four words.
+ 2. **The warrant card names somebody else** — it has always been an Establishment card.
+ *(Use the agent with the most Coherence left; they have the furthest to fall.)*
+ 3. **Registry at the Bureau has always had Bellhouse on its establishment.** Bewley's
+ in-tray has a renewal in it.
+ 4. **Region 12 has always had one million, one hundred and forty-one thousand people in
+ it, and every one of them is waiting for Centre to tell them when.**
+
+ The case is over. **This option must stay available** — a choice with one acceptable
+ answer is not a choice.
+
+### The endings
+
+| Ending | What it takes | What the register says |
+|---|---|---|
+| **Silenced and released** | One neutralisation, then clause 4 or Sowerby | A thousand people come up over a week. The Bureau opens files on all of them. **The dream persists in the born-below** unless the Annex correction reached row two. |
+| **Silenced, Sowerby's release** | His script break, and his choice | As above, and nobody spends Coherence. Sowerby is the last up and stands on the moor for an hour. |
+| **Silenced, not released** | The Address stopped but nobody cancels | The Seat stays down, safely. The department returns next month with better paper. **Mr Smith writes again in ninety days.** |
+| **Released, not silenced** | Clause 4 first | The broadcast, at once. See above. |
+| **The Address goes out** | Nobody reached the tape or the feed | See above. |
+
+**Whatever the ending, the letters come up.** Sowerby's file is the department's first
+evidence of Mr Smith with more than a name on it. **Read this last, to close the case:**
+
+> *Three days later a buff envelope arrives in Registry, in Bewley's in-tray, franked with a
+> circle and a stroke. It is addressed to the agents by name. Inside is a single line: "With
+> thanks for the count. — J. Smith, for Centre."*
### Teague
Warden Michael Teague, thirty-eight, born below, is the only person in Bellhouse who has
-decided the surface is a lie — because if it is not a lie then his whole life was an
-administrative error, and that is unbearable. He is the act's only violence and he is
-avoidable.
+decided the surface is a lie — because if it is not, his mother died down here for a filing
+and his daughter was born into one. **He is the case's only violence and he is avoidable.**
-**His one paragraph, printed so the GM can read it aloud:** *"I've read the same file you
-have. I've read it more times than you have. And what it says is that on the fourth of
-November 1974 this country was attacked and two hundred and six people did their duty. If
-that's wrong then my mother died down here for nothing and my daughter was born down here
-for nothing, and I'm not able to hold that. So I'm going to ask you to leave, and then I'm
-going to ask you again."*
+**His paragraph, printed to be read aloud:** *"I've read what Centre sends. I've read it more
+times than you have. It says the region's dead and we're what's left. If that's wrong then
+everything I've done is wrong, and I'm not able to hold that. So I'm going to ask you to
+come with me, and then I'm going to ask you again."*
-**The script break:** say his daughter's name. He has one — Nell, nine, in the crèche —
-and any agent who has been to the school knows it. Naming her puts him back in the room
-as a father instead of a warden, and he steps aside. `[CUS: Insight — he is not
-threatening anyone; he is asking to be argued out of it]`. *Success:* he stands down and
-becomes the strongest voice for ending 3. *Failure:* he escorts them out of the Control
-Room and they must find another way back in before 06:00 — which costs them the dossier
-scene they had least secured, not the act.
-
-**If it comes to a fight:** he is one man with a 1974 service pistol against field agents
-and he will lose, quickly, in front of his colleagues and his daughter's teacher. The
-scenario does not stop the table doing this. It does not reward it either. **Everyone in
-Bellhouse who was going to help them stops helping them.**
-
-**Containment's beat, and it is the only one they get.** Teague has to get past somebody to
-reach the folder, and the somebody is the party's heavy. **Give that player the choice out
-loud:** put him down, or stand still and let him come. Standing still is the stronger play
-and the scenario should say so — a warden who walks into a man who will not hit him has
-nowhere to put what he is carrying. Desk pass 1's heavy scored his own session 3/10 and
-said "I carried a chair"; this is the fix, and it costs the act nothing.
+**His script break is Nell**, and it works in Act Two or Act Three. After it he is the
+strongest voice below for letting them go, and **he stands at the studio door on Thursday**
+if the table asks him to.
### EXPOSURE — the one thing that will kill the party
-If the agents call the incident in as a containment failure rather than an arrangement, the
-department sends a **quarantine unit**, and it gets there first.
+If the agents call the Seat in as a containment failure rather than a rescue, the department
+sends a **quarantine unit**, and it gets there first. **SO-H06 exists so that nobody does this
+by accident.**
-**Read the bestiary entry before you put it on the table.** Desk pass 2 ran it against
-this scenario's own declared six — not the four-player baseline — and it **wiped all six in
-fifteen rounds, five of them dead**, *without the sterilisation blast firing at all*,
-because that power is out of the fight harness. The recorded figure against the frozen four
-is a wipe rate of **87.4%**. **The
-real encounter is worse than the number, and the number is already a party-killer.**
+**Read the bestiary entry before you put it on the table.** v0.7's second desk pass ran it
+against this cast and it wiped all six without its sterilisation blast firing, because that
+power is out of the fight harness. The recorded figure against the frozen four is a wipe
+rate of **87.4%**.
-**Run it as a clock, not as a fight. All three of these go on the table, out loud:**
+**Run it as a clock, out loud:**
-- **The countdown is six rounds and the GM tracks it openly.** It is in the bestiary entry
- and nowhere else, and a GM who has not read that entry will not run it — which removes
- the only thing that makes this survivable. **Count down out loud from six.**
-- **The argue-down is a Borrowed Authority stretch**, one tier beyond scope, using the same
- Ellerby-Stannard credential as ending 3: `[CUS: Anomaly Lore — a standing authorisation
- outranks a containment order, and the unit knows it]`, at −20 per red flag broken. **Each
- dossier item they assembled for ending 3 counts here too.** *Success:* the unit stands
- down where it is and waits for Centre, which takes days. *Special:* it stands down and
- its officer gives them a name to call.
-- **Failure is not the end of the attempt.** The countdown continues and they may try once
- more before it expires, at −20. If it runs out they are in a BLAST of 6d6 with a radius
- of the whole location, and so is everybody in Bellhouse. **Five rounds is enough to reach
- the adit and it is not enough to reach the crèche, and the players should be told that.**
+- **Six rounds, counted openly**, then the site is rendered — BLAST 6d6, the whole location,
+ and a thousand people in it.
+- **The argue-down** is the same Borrowed Authority stretch as the Annex correction:
+ `[CUS: Anomaly Lore — a Seat under a standing order outranks a containment instruction]` at
+ −20 per red flag broken, and the same dossier items count. *Success:* the unit stands down
+ and waits for the Bureau.
+- **One more attempt** at −20 if the first fails. **Five rounds reach the lobby. They do not
+ reach the crèche.** Tell the players that.
-**This is the scenario telling the truth about its own setting:** the fight is the failure
-state, and the paperwork is the way out. Do not spring the unit as a twist. If a player
-says the words that summon it, say plainly what they have just done.
---
## NPC Roster — GM quick sheet
-Every NPC gets one line of essence first. That line is what to play if you have five
-seconds and the table is looking at you.
-
### Below
-**Controller Edwin Sowerby, 61** — *the man who has done his duty for fifty-two years and
-needs it to have been worth doing.*
-Went down aged nine with his mother, which makes him the oldest person in Bellhouse who
-remembers the sky, and he does not talk about it. Signs the renewal because renewal is not
-a decision (SO-H02, clause 5) and he has never been offered the chance to make it one. He
-is courteous, precise and lonely. **If the players give him a decision he will take it
-seriously** — he is not a wall, he is a man who has never been asked. Supports ending 3
-if Pennyfeather and Teague both back it.
+**Controller Edwin Sowerby, 61** — *has obeyed Centre for fifty-two years and is afraid,
+for the first time, of what Centre will say.*
+Went down aged nine with his mother, a Registry clerk. Controller since 2011. Reads Centre's
+letters aloud at every renewal and keeps the rest in a file on his desk. Courteous, lonely,
+procedural. **He sends the wardens because Centre prefers enumeration and it sounds like
+paperwork.** Break: Mr Smith's hand beside the real Home Office paper.
-**Registrar Alice Pennyfeather, 52** — *the clerk who has already done the sum and is
-waiting for somebody to ask her.*
-Born below. Has taken the arithmetic to Sowerby three times and been told, correctly, that
-renewal is not minuted as a decision. Hands over SO-H03 to anybody who asks her a straight
-question. **She is the act's destination and the case's conscience**, and in ending 1 she
-is the one who tells the agents what it will cost the children, because she has worked
-that out too.
+**Registrar Alice Pennyfeather, 51** — *establishment number 413, the first child born
+below, and the only person who has read Annex D as a sentence.*
+Hands SO-H02 and SO-H03 to anyone who asks a straight question. **She holds the pen in
+Registry**, and whether she enters the agents is the act's hidden hinge. She will carry the
+birth register up if asked.
-**Dr Ivy Larkhall, 44** — *the doctor who has never had a patient with sunlight in their
-history, and has written the best paper nobody will ever read about it.*
-Born below. Curious rather than frightened, and the first person to ask the agents an
-intelligent question. Half-knows about the drill: Marlow has said things in the night for
-years. Will not break a confidence, but will say *ask her, and ask her kindly*.
+**Dr Ivy Larkhall, 44** — *the doctor who has found that eight hundred and eighty-one people
+share one dream, and has nobody to publish it to.*
+Curious, not frightened. Delivers Ruth Cotter's baby on Thursday. Treats anybody hurt in the
+detention, on either side, without being asked.
-**Deputy Controller Edith Marlow, 101** — *the woman who filed a war because she thought
-it would save a fortnight.*
-In the end bed in the sick bay. Has not spoken plainly since 2019 and is not confused —
-she is ashamed, and Insight tells those apart (clue 11). Her own memo — in the sick-bay
-day room, on the shelf with the old ward files, where the party can find it without being
-told it exists — carries the fortnight paragraph and is the most damning object in the
-scenario. **She will
-confirm it was a drill if she is asked kindly and will deny it if she is pressed.**
+**Deputy Controller Edith Marlow, 101** — *the woman who signed for a stranger because he
+asked her to.*
+In the end bed in the sick bay. Not confused; ashamed. **She is the only person alive who
+has seen Mr Smith** and she cannot picture him. Kindly asked, she says it was the exercise.
+Pressed, she denies it. Her box is on the day-room shelf.
-**Warden Michael Teague, 38** — *the only man down here who has decided the surface is a
-lie, because the alternative is unbearable.*
-Born below. Head of the site's eleven-person police. Widower. His daughter Nell is nine
-and in the crèche. Full paragraph and script break in Act Three. **Not a villain, and the
-scenario should never call him one.**
+**Warden Michael Teague, 38** — *the only man below who has decided the surface is a lie.*
+Head of the site's eleven police. Widower. Daughter **Nell, 9**, in the crèche. Leads the
+detail himself. Leaves his pistol in the armoury on purpose. **Not a villain.**
-**Sub-Officer Kit Marlow, 17** — *a girl who has drawn the sky four thousand times from
-one photograph and wants to know if she got the blue right.*
-Edith's great-granddaughter, born below, oldest of the children, teaches the little ones
-their regional geography from a 1971 atlas. **She is the cost of ending 1 and she should
-be a person before she is a price** — give her a scene in Act Two, doing something
-ordinary and competent, before Act Three asks anybody to decide anything.
+**Sub-Officer Kit Marlow, 17** — *draws the sun the way the little ones do, and has started to
+wonder why.*
+Edith's great-granddaughter. Teaches the under-elevens geography from a 1971 atlas. Shows the
+agents the drawings without being asked; knows about the three o'clock tone. **Give her a
+scene doing something ordinary before anybody decides anything.**
-**The site, as a character** — two hundred and thirty-one people, warm corridors, floor
-polish, soup, a library, a remembrance service for the surface dead held every year for
-fifty-two years. *They were told Centre would come when it could.*
+**Mr Ogden, Enquiries** — *has waited fifty-two years for somebody to come through that door
+and has no form for it.*
+
+**Ruth Cotter, 24** — *due on Thursday, and would like everybody to stop calling her baby
+"the thousandth".*
+
+**The Seat, as a character** — a thousand people, warm corridors, soup, a housing list, an
+Allotments Show, and six words at the end of every bulletin. *Centre will tell us when.*
### Above
-**Joan Wetherlaw, 67** — *has been sweeping ash off her yard for four years and has
-stopped telling anybody.*
-Farms three-quarters of a mile from the vent head. Her father was a works foreman at
-Sheldon in 1974 and was told to stop digging; his papers are in a box she has never shown
-anyone. Not a mystic and not a crank — a tired woman with a brush who has been right the
-whole time.
+**Joan Wetherlaw, 67** — *has swept coal soot off her yard her whole life and signed for a
+parcel she should not have.*
+Her father closed the pit in 1975 on Centre's order. His box has the frank in it. A man in a
+grey coat came in 2022; she cannot describe him and it frightens her more than the soot.
-**Nell Teague, 9** — *has one question about horses and will ask it at the worst possible
-moment.* In the crèche. Her name is the script break.
+**Mr Bewley, Registry** — *wants the letters.* *"Bring me everything in his hand."*
-### Creatures used — all from the bestiary, nothing new to build
+**Mr Prosser, Stores** — *nineteen years of telling agents what they may take.*
+
+### Never met
+
+**Mr Smith, for Centre** — a grey coat, the right paper, a pleasant manner, and a face nobody
+can picture. A messenger for the far side's higher orders, not one of them. **He has no
+sheet, no portrait, and no scene.** He is the thread from Mercy Draw and he outlasts this
+case.
+
+### Creatures used — all from the bestiary
| Creature | Where | What it is for |
|---|---|---|
-| **The census** | Act Two, the Registry stacks | Counting, for fifty-two years; ENUMERATED is permanent and the department cannot undo it |
-| **The overwriter** | Act Three, ending 2 only | The correction, performing itself; cannot be dropped and is not trying to fight |
-| **Quarantine unit** | EXPOSURE, if the agents call it in as containment | The failure state; argue it down with the ending-3 credential or die |
+| **The census** | Act Two, the Registry stacks | Counting the Establishment; ENUMERATED is permanent and here it also enrols |
+| **The overwriter** | Act Three, only if the Address finishes | Correcting the region to match the record |
+| **Quarantine unit** | EXPOSURE, if the agents call it in | The failure state; argue it down or die |
+
+### Cast actors — in the compendium
+
+| Actor | Where | What it is for |
+|---|---|---|
+| **Bellhouse warden** | Act Two, the detail | Detaining, not killing; one actor for all of them |
+| **Warden Michael Teague** | Act One and Act Two | Leads the detail; the Nell script break |
---
@@ -918,38 +922,28 @@ moment.* In the crèche. Her name is the script break.
-> ⚠ **THE DECLARED CAST IS LOAD-BEARING ON THE BUILD.** The `` comment above
-> is read by `check-rollable`, which holds every skill this document names to being
-> reachable at 25% or better by somebody in that list. Change the cast and re-run the
-> guards before trusting a single clue route.
-
-Deliberately **not** CLEAN GROUND's six, so the two cases exercise different sheets.
+> ⚠ **THE DECLARED CAST IS LOAD-BEARING ON THE BUILD.** The marker above is read by
+> `check-rollable`, which holds every skill named here to 25% or better on somebody in the
+> list, and by `detention-tables`, which measures the Act Two fight against these six and
+> the four-player cut. Change it and re-run both.
| # | Agent | Why they are here | The routes they own |
|---|---|---|---|
-| 1 | **Marta Holloway** — Senior Field Officer, lead | Signs for it and reads it first | Navigate (the ash edge), Stealth (the way in), Tradecraft |
-| 2 | **Arun Bhattacharya** — Registry Officer | The return landed on his section's desk | Research (SO-H02, the birth register), Knowledge (the 1962 survey), Anomaly Lore (**the ending-3 roll**) |
-| 3 | **Kate Renshaw** — Interview Officer | Because everyone down there wants to talk | Insight 63 (**Marlow**, Teague, Pennyfeather — all three), Persuade (Joan, and Pennyfeather's counter-signature), Listen |
-| 4 | **Marek Kowalczyk** — Probationary, engineering | Somebody has to read the plant | Repair (Electronics) (**the relay**), Repair (Mechanical) (the pipe), Engineering (Field Systems) (the blast door) |
-| 5 | **Dr Chidi Nkemdirim** — Probationary, medicine | The dog tissue is on his bench | Insight 58 and Knowledge 58 — **he reads the dog and the ash with those**, so the clues survive the four-player cut; Listen, Persuade |
-| 6 | **Ben Okonkwo** — Field Officer, containment | In case it is the other kind of case. It is not | Athletics, Brawl, Firearm (Rifle) — **and the scenario is built so he never needs them.** His beat is Teague in Act Three: stand still and let him come |
+| 1 | **Marta Holloway** — Senior Field Officer, lead | Signs for the case and carries SO-H06 | Navigate 63 (the soot edge), Stealth 63 (the Allotments), **Tradecraft 63 (Enquiries, and Sowerby's key)** |
+| 2 | **Arun Bhattacharya** — Registry Officer | The return was his section's find | Research 63 (10b, 11c, 16, 17), Knowledge 63, **Occult 63 (Revelation 5)**, **Anomaly Lore 63 (the Annex correction)** |
+| 3 | **Kate Renshaw** — Interview Officer | Everyone below wants to talk | **Persuade 63 (Sowerby, Teague, Pennyfeather, Joan)**, Insight 63 (Marlow, Larkhall), Listen 63 (the response, the intercom) |
+| 4 | **Marek Kowalczyk** — Probationary, engineering | Somebody has to read the plant | **Repair (Electronics) 58 (the feed, the Geiger counter)**, Repair (Mechanical) 58 (the safe, the Sump lock), Demolition 58 |
+| 5 | **Dr Chidi Nkemdirim** — Probationary, medicine | The sooty dog is on his bench | Insight 58 and Knowledge 58, backing Renshaw and Bhattacharya; he helps Larkhall with the birth |
+| 6 | **Ben Okonkwo** — Field Officer, containment | In case it is the other kind of case | Athletics, Brawl — **the detention**, and the studio door on Thursday. His best play is to stand still |
-**Casting note for Okonkwo's player, given before the game:** this case has no fight the
-party has to win. He is not wasted — he is the one who carries Marlow's chair, holds the
-adit, and stands beside Teague without raising anything. Tell his player that up front, the
-way CLEAN GROUND tells Ashcroft's.
+**Casting note for Okonkwo's player, given before the game:** SO-H06 forbids him the easy
+answer, and the scenario is built so that he is the reason the detail does not become a
+beating. Tell his player that up front.
-**At four players,** cut Okonkwo and Nkemdirim. **No clue needs reassigning** — desk pass 2
-audited the four remaining sheets and found that Science (Biology) and Medicine were the
-only two skills that vanished with them, so clues 1 and 3 were rewritten onto Knowledge
-and Insight for every table size and the scenario no longer calls for either.
-
-⚠ **Why that matters more than it looks.** `check-rollable` holds this document to its
-`` declaration, which names six. **A four-player cut written as prose is
-checked by nothing.** The old version worked only because one sentence reassigned two
-clues correctly; edit that sentence, or add a Medicine call to Act One, and four-player
-tables silently lose two clues with every guard still green. Nkemdirim still reads the dog
-tissue — he just reads it with Insight.
+**At four players,** cut Okonkwo and Nkemdirim. **No essential clue needs either**: every
+roll they own is backed by Renshaw or Bhattacharya at 63, and Medicine is never called for —
+Larkhall delivers the baby. **The detention is harder at four** and the table above says how
+much harder.
---
@@ -957,54 +951,45 @@ tissue — he just reads it with Insight.
| # | Location | Act | One line |
|---|---|---|---|
-| 1 | Wetherlaw farm | 1 | Ash on the yard for four years, and a woman with a brush |
-| 2 | The ash edge | 1 | A straight line for 400 m, then a right angle |
-| 3 | Sheldon Moor vent head | 1 | A painted mushroom in the heather, warm to the hand |
-| 4 | The postal pipe | 1 | Four-inch pneumatic, pressurised, sealed in 1974 |
-| 5 | The service adit | 1 | Four hundred metres of 1962 concrete; the lights still work |
-| 6 | Blast door and lobby | 1/2 | Never locked. A visitor book with three entries |
-| 7 | Control Room | 2/3 | The tannoy, the 1974 map, the desk where it gets signed |
-| 8 | Registry | 2 | Fifty-two years of files, the sum, and something counting in the stacks |
-| 9 | Sick bay | 2 | Larkhall, and Edith Marlow in the end bed |
-| 10 | Crèche and school | 2 | Nineteen children, a 1971 atlas, and Kit Marlow's drawings of the sky |
-| 11 | Pipe room | 2 | The outgoing tray, and fifty-two years of unanswered post |
-| 12 | Plant floor | 2/3 | Generators, the renewal relay, Teague's office |
+| 1 | Wetherlaw farm | 1 | Coal soot on the yard, and a woman with a brush |
+| 2 | The soot edge | 1 | A straight line for 400 m, then a right angle |
+| 3 | Sheldon Moor vent head | 1 | Warm to the hand, smelling of a coal fire; the crossing |
+| 4 | The postal pipe | 1/2 | Four inches wide, and Centre answers through it |
+| 5 | The adit | 1 | Backfilled rubble since 1975 |
+| 6 | Lobby and Enquiries | 1 | Mr Ogden, and no form for visitors |
+| 7 | Control Room and studio | 2/3 | The tannoy, Centre's file, the safe, the tape |
+| 8 | Registry | 2 | The Order, the Establishment, and something counting |
+| 9 | Sick bay and maternity | 2/3 | Marlow, Larkhall, Ruth Cotter |
+| 10 | Crèche and school | 2 | The drawings, and a tone at three in the morning |
+| 11 | Pipe room | 2 | Centre's in-tray |
+| 12 | Plant floor | 2/3 | Boilers, the coal face, the transmitter rack |
+| 13 | Vigil hall | 2/3 | The Reading of the Region; the renewal assembly |
+| 14 | The Allotments and Buffer Depot | 2 | Sodium lamps, trout, and stock received from Centre |
+| 15 | The Sump | 2 | Dry cells by the drainage level |
---
## GM notes — three things that do not get resolved
-Name these as *do not resolve* so a helpful GM does not answer them.
-
-1. **Where the answered post went.** Fifty-two years of returns went up the pipe. One came
- back out, in May, on a real desk. Nothing in this case explains the other ten thousand.
-2. **What the census was counting for.** It has been tallying since 1974 and it is nearly
- finished. The scenario never says finished *for what*.
-3. **Whether Marlow was right.** She thought a real one was coming inside the year. The
- department's own 1974 traffic is not in this file and the players cannot get it.
+1. **What Mr Smith is.** A messenger. For whom, exactly, and what he reports, the case does
+ not say. His next letter is the next case.
+2. **Where Centre's stock comes from.** Thirty years of issues through a four-inch pipe. Do
+ not explain it.
+3. **Whether the dream stops.** Row two of the Annex correction silences the intercom. It
+ does not say the born-below stop dreaming, and they will be asked about it for the rest of
+ their lives.
---
## Open questions for Tim
-- **Kit Marlow.** She is the cost of ending 1 and the draft may lean on a seventeen-year-old
- too hard. The alternative is to put the weight on the whole sixty-one and never give one
- of them a name — colder, and possibly better.
-- ✅ **Runtime — superseded.** The 45/55/50 estimate was replaced by the measured 45/75/50
- below.
-- **Is ending 3 findable?** It depends on the players reading clause 4 *and* clause 5 and
- thinking about scope rather than cancellation. It may need a nudge written into
- Pennyfeather.
-- **Does this want a fourth act?** CLEAN GROUND has one and uses it well. Three is the
- brief and three is what this is. **Four passes say the signing carries its fifty minutes
- comfortably** — passes 3 and 4 both landed Act Three on the nose — so this is probably
- settled as a no.
-- ✅ **THE BUDGET — decided 15 September 2026. The slot is 3h15.** Act Two ran 75, 70 and
- then 66 with every cut taken. The alternative was taking twelve minutes out of the sick
- bay, which is the only non-load-bearing block that size — but Revelation 3's first route
- lives in it and it is the one that plays best. **The slot moved instead.** Three things
- follow and they are all improvements: the acts are budgeted at what they measured rather
- than at what would fit, there are fifteen minutes of genuine slack for a real table,
- and **the Pacing Note's cuts stop being defaults** — which is the proper answer to desk
- pass 4's finding that the cheapest default cut gutted the likeliest ending, rather than a
- workaround for it.
+- **Mr Smith's register.** He is written here as a messenger for the Vesh. If the campaign
+ wants him to answer to something else, the only text that names it is the Plot Summary and
+ the roster.
+- **The dream persisting.** The best ending still leaves the born-below dreaming unless the
+ Annex correction reaches row two. That is deliberate — the thread — but it may read as a
+ punishment.
+- **Kit Marlow.** She was the cost of v0.7's tidy ending. Here she is a witness, not a price.
+ Check she still earns her scene.
+- **Runtime.** 45/75/50 is inherited, not measured. Act Two has more locations than v0.7 and a
+ fight in it. **Desk pass 1 should time it before anything else.**
diff --git a/docs/scenarios/STANDING_ORDER_ART.md b/docs/scenarios/STANDING_ORDER_ART.md
index 7fbaf50..f338f3b 100644
--- a/docs/scenarios/STANDING_ORDER_ART.md
+++ b/docs/scenarios/STANDING_ORDER_ART.md
@@ -10,6 +10,10 @@ regeneration is possible; per house convention the prompt is part of the documen
and the **quarantine unit** — are bestiary entries and their prompts live in
`BESTIARY_ART.md`, not here. Everything in this sheet is new work.
+**v1.0 (16 September 2026) reused every plate.** The rewrite kept the site, the people and
+the art; only the uses below changed. **Mr Smith must never be drawn** — a face is the one
+thing the case says nobody can recall — and no prompt for him belongs in this sheet.
+
---
## Art direction for this scenario
@@ -64,12 +68,12 @@ regenerate it** — a picture that contradicts a clue is worse than no picture.
|---|---|
| `so_01_cover.webp` | Cover plate |
| `so_02_wetherlaw.webp` | Act One — the farmyard |
-| `so_03_ash_edge.webp` | Act One — clue 2, the surveyed line |
-| `so_04_adit.webp` | Act One — the service adit portal |
+| `so_03_ash_edge.webp` | Act One — clue 3, the soot edge (the file keeps its old name) |
+| `so_04_adit.webp` | Act One — the adit mouth, backfilled; the crossing is above it |
| `so_05_corridor.webp` | Act Two — arrival below |
-| `so_06_control_room.webp` | Act Two / Three — the broadcast and the signing |
-| `so_07_registry.webp` | Act Two — the stacks, and the thing counting in them |
-| `so_08_creche.webp` | Act Two — the school, and the cost of ending 1 |
+| `so_06_control_room.webp` | Act Two / Three — the bulletin, Centre's file, the studio |
+| `so_07_registry.webp` | Act Two — the Establishment, and the thing counting in the stacks |
+| `so_08_creche.webp` | Act Two — the school, the drawings, the intercom |
**Shared prefix.** Every plate prompt begins with this and it is not optional:
@@ -171,8 +175,10 @@ trusting the exit code.
## Not generated — draw these
-**The Bellhouse section drawing.** A cutaway of the site with the seven Act Two locations
-numbered, and a key below the drawing. **This must be hand-built SVG and must not be
+**The Bellhouse section drawing.** A cutaway of the site with the Seat's locations
+numbered, and a key below the drawing. Issue 2 (v1.0) relabels the key for the rewrite and
+lists three pit-gallery locations as *not drawn*; re-render with
+`rsvg-convert -w 2400 -h 1700` then `cwebp -q 88`. **This must be hand-built SVG and must not be
prompted.** Midjourney will not hold legible text or accurate geography, and this drawing's
whole job is labels. Two rules from AFTERIMAGE v3.1: numbered callouts with a key beneath
rather than labels sprayed across the plan, and **the drawing says only what the site says**
diff --git a/packs/standingorder/000003.log b/packs/standingorder/000003.log
index 42fc31e..d1e9368 100644
Binary files a/packs/standingorder/000003.log and b/packs/standingorder/000003.log differ
diff --git a/tools/build-packs.mjs b/tools/build-packs.mjs
index e59ec38..f3fadb9 100644
--- a/tools/build-packs.mjs
+++ b/tools/build-packs.mjs
@@ -1023,13 +1023,20 @@ function cullandScene() {
+ `${showJournal.pages.length} plates to show`);
}
-// STANDING ORDER — the three-act crossing case. Journals, plates and the section map;
-// no cast actors, because nobody in it has a stat block. The GM pages are read from the
+// STANDING ORDER — the three-act crossing case. Journals, plates, the section map, and
+// the two cast actors the Act Two detention needs. The GM pages are read from the
// scenario document itself at build time (see scenario-standingorder.mjs). Played on
// the duty-roster sheets in the Pregens pack.
{
const SO = await import("./scenario-standingorder.mjs");
+ const castDocs = [];
+ for (const spec of SO.SO_CAST) {
+ const { actorDoc, itemDocs } = buildActor(spec, "npc");
+ actorDoc.items = itemDocs;
+ castDocs.push(actorDoc);
+ }
+
const showJournal = imageJournal("STANDING ORDER — Show the players", "so_show", SO.SO_PLATES);
const facesJournal = imageJournal("STANDING ORDER — The people", "so_faces", SO.SO_FACES);
const gmJournal = journalDoc("STANDING ORDER — Run the case", "so_gm", SO.SO_PAGES);
@@ -1057,18 +1064,20 @@ function cullandScene() {
_id: advId,
name: "STANDING ORDER — The Bellhouse Seat",
img: IC("journal") ?? ICON.journal,
- caption: "A three-act crossing case. A seat of government, and a war that never came.",
+ caption: "A three-act crossing case. A thousand people underground, and the man who writes to them.",
description:
- "
Two hundred and six people went underground in 1974 to govern the country "
- + "after the war. There was no war.
"
- + "
They have been governing it for fifty-two years, the order that put them there "
- + "renews itself every ninety days, and the next renewal is on Thursday. The site's "
- + "record now counts more people than the region it governs, and the record is about "
- + "to make the region match.
"
- + "
Three acts, 3h00 of play in a 3h15 slot. Nobody below is a monster, and the last "
- + "act is a decision rather than a fight. Played on the duty-roster sheets from the "
- + "Pregens compendium.
",
- actors: [],
+ "
A thousand people are waiting under Sheldon Moor for the all-clear from a war "
+ + "that never happened. Every ninety days, somebody writes to tell them to keep "
+ + "waiting. It is not the government.
"
+ + "
The agents cross into a sealed 1974 Regional Seat of Government that has run "
+ + "itself like a council for fifty-two years. The brief is to bring its people home, "
+ + "diplomatically. The Seat does not trust newcomers, its Controller has been told to "
+ + "count them, and on Thursday it will surface and speak to the region in words that "
+ + "are not the government's.
"
+ + "
Three acts, 3h00 of play in a 3h15 slot. One detention, one broadcast, and the "
+ + "second appearance of Mr Smith. Played on the duty-roster sheets from the Pregens "
+ + "compendium.
",
+ actors: castDocs,
items: [],
journal: [
{ ...gmJournal.doc, pages: gmJournal.pages },
@@ -1081,7 +1090,7 @@ function cullandScene() {
};
await writePack("standingorder", [[`!adventures!${advId}`, adventure]]);
- console.log(` standing STANDING ORDER — ${SO.SO_PAGES.length} GM pages, `
+ console.log(` standing STANDING ORDER — ${castDocs.length} cast, ${SO.SO_PAGES.length} GM pages, `
+ `${SO.SO_HANDOUTS.length} handouts, ${showJournal.pages.length} plates, `
+ `${facesJournal.pages.length} faces`);
}
diff --git a/tools/scenario-standingorder.mjs b/tools/scenario-standingorder.mjs
index db3ee7d..0a5ed12 100644
--- a/tools/scenario-standingorder.mjs
+++ b/tools/scenario-standingorder.mjs
@@ -8,8 +8,10 @@
* house format uses and throws on nothing — an unknown construct comes through as a
* paragraph, which is visible in the journal rather than silently dropped.
*
- * No cast actors: nobody in this case has a stat block. The people below are not meant
- * to be fought, and the three creatures are the bestiary's own.
+ * Two cast actors, and only two: the wardens the Controller sends in Act Two, and the man
+ * who leads them. Everybody else below is there to be talked to, and the three creatures
+ * are the bestiary's own. The detention fight is measured by tools/detention-tables.mjs
+ * against the declared cast, and the document cites that artifact.
*/
import { readFileSync } from "node:fs";
import path from "node:path";
@@ -117,8 +119,8 @@ const section = re => {
they are what a stand-in GM needs before anything else. */
const tagline = MD.split("\n## ")[0].split("\n").filter(l => /^>/.test(l)).join("\n");
const notObvious = section(/^STATUS\b/).body.split(/^### /m)
- .find(b => b.startsWith("The three things"));
-if (!notObvious) throw new Error(`${SOURCE}: STATUS has lost "The three things that are not obvious"`);
+ .find(b => /^The .*things that are not obvious/.test(b));
+if (!notObvious) throw new Error(`${SOURCE}: STATUS has lost "The things that are not obvious"`);
const ART = (id, alt) =>
``;
@@ -159,8 +161,8 @@ export const SO_HANDOUTS = section(/^Handouts\b/).body.split(/^### /m).slice(1).
export const SO_PLATES = [
{ name: "1 · Sheldon Moor — the vent head", src: "art/scenes/so_01_cover.webp" },
{ name: "2 · Wetherlaw farm", src: "art/scenes/so_02_wetherlaw.webp" },
- { name: "3 · The ash edge", src: "art/scenes/so_03_ash_edge.webp" },
- { name: "4 · The service adit", src: "art/scenes/so_04_adit.webp" },
+ { name: "3 · The soot edge", src: "art/scenes/so_03_ash_edge.webp" },
+ { name: "4 · The adit mouth", src: "art/scenes/so_04_adit.webp" },
{ name: "5 · Bellhouse — the corridor", src: "art/scenes/so_05_corridor.webp" },
{ name: "6 · The Control Room", src: "art/scenes/so_06_control_room.webp" },
{ name: "7 · The Registry", src: "art/scenes/so_07_registry.webp" },
@@ -168,6 +170,46 @@ export const SO_PLATES = [
{ name: "9 · Bellhouse — section", src: "art/maps/bellhouse-section.webp" }
];
+/* The detention detail. Truncheons, not firearms: the Seat's armoury is locked and the
+ Controller holds the key, and the order that sends them says DETAIN. Tactics are written
+ for the GM; the harness does not model restraint, so its figures are the ceiling. */
+export const SO_CAST = [
+
+{ key: "so_warden", name: "Bellhouse warden",
+ role: "ACT TWO. One of the site's eleven police, born below. Use for all of them.",
+ chosenStyle: "reflex", naturalArmour: 0, species: "baseline",
+ ch: { str: 13, siz: 13, con: 13, int: 10, pow: 11, dex: 12, cha: 10, edu: 10 },
+ skills: [{ fam: "melee_weapon", spec: "club", val: 50 },
+ { fam: "brawl", spec: "", val: 50 },
+ { fam: "dodge", spec: "", val: 30 },
+ { fam: "spot", spec: "", val: 45 }],
+ weapons: ["punch", "cudgel"],
+ tactics: "A wooden truncheon, issued 1974 and oiled every Friday since. They have "
+ + "arrested drunks and a man who stole from the Allotments; they have never fought anybody "
+ + "who fights back. They come in pairs, ask once, and take hold of arms. THEY ARE "
+ + "DETAINING, NOT KILLING: a warden stops hitting an agent who is down and puts the "
+ + "cuffs on instead. A warden who is hurt badly steps back and calls for Teague. If an "
+ + "agent draws a firearm, every warden in sight stops and stares, because nobody below "
+ + "has seen one used, and the next thing they do is run for the Controller." },
+
+{ key: "so_teague", name: "Warden Michael Teague",
+ role: "ACT TWO. Head of the site's police. The man sent to fetch them.",
+ chosenStyle: "reflex", naturalArmour: 0, species: "baseline",
+ ch: { str: 14, siz: 14, con: 14, int: 12, pow: 13, dex: 13, cha: 12, edu: 12 },
+ skills: [{ fam: "melee_weapon", spec: "club", val: 60 },
+ { fam: "brawl", spec: "", val: 60 },
+ { fam: "dodge", spec: "", val: 40 },
+ { fam: "insight", spec: "", val: 50 },
+ { fam: "spot", spec: "", val: 55 }],
+ weapons: ["punch", "cudgel"],
+ tactics: "The only man below who has decided the surface is a lie. He leads the "
+ + "detail himself because he will not send anybody where he would not go. His "
+ + "service pistol is in the armoury and he leaves it there on purpose. He asks them to "
+ + "come quietly, twice. SCRIPT BREAK: his daughter Nell, nine, is in the creche; an "
+ + "agent who names her puts a father in the corridor instead of a warden, and he "
+ + "stands the detail down." }
+];
+
/* The people, for showing. Joan Wetherlaw has no portrait yet — see STANDING_ORDER_ART. */
export const SO_FACES = [
{ name: "Controller Edwin Sowerby", src: "art/portraits/so_sowerby.webp" },