From c0227359fc92e648abf6b94804a7c07f8fc1329f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fredhicks Date: Thu, 23 Sep 2021 16:37:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Updated a phrase for clarity Updated a phrase for clarity --- Thirsty Sword Lesbians/TSL.html | 2 +- Thirsty Sword Lesbians/translation.json | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/TSL.html b/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/TSL.html index be520347f9..97b3283a1c 100644 --- a/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/TSL.html +++ b/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/TSL.html @@ -1794,7 +1794,7 @@ }, { name: "Antique", - body: "Choose an aesthetic and past.", + body: "Choose an aesthetic. Then, pick a past from this list:", bullets: [ "You were once close to someone. Why are they no longer around?", "You're obsolete. Who or what replaced you?", diff --git a/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/translation.json b/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/translation.json index 9f2b1a11b9..11f783ef84 100644 --- a/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/translation.json +++ b/Thirsty Sword Lesbians/translation.json @@ -750,7 +750,7 @@ "Feelings and sensations linger. For the next scene, a spectator may avoid taking one Condition by thinking about your performance.": "Feelings and sensations linger. For the next scene, a spectator may avoid taking one Condition by thinking about your performance.", "You get +1 forward to Entice while performing. Optionally, the influencer gets credit for the performance.": "You get +1 forward to Entice while performing. Optionally, the influencer gets credit for the performance.", "Antique": "Antique", - "Choose an aesthetic and past.": "Choose an aesthetic and past.", + "Choose an aesthetic. Then, pick a past from this list:": "Choose an aesthetic. Then, pick a past from this list:", "You were once close to someone. Why are they no longer around?": "You were once close to someone. Why are they no longer around?", "You're obsolete. Who or what replaced you?": "You're obsolete. Who or what replaced you?", "You weren't made to last. Why do others consider you disposable?": "You weren't made to last. Why do others consider you disposable?",