Desk pass 9's first fix, applied. The countdown's unsettled row and the Act
Four paragraph both compared 14.5% against 3.8%, and the 3.8% is the rate
against Ashcroft at his undiminished 85 — a contest that never happens,
because if he refuses the thing reaches for the lowest POW in the room.
Against what a table actually rolls: 11.3% at six players (Okonkwo), 10.0% in
the four-player cut (Braithwaite), 14.5% if he accepted. The factor is 1.29,
not 3.9. Both places now name who the target actually is, and the paragraph
carries the correction inline so the claim cannot be re-derived from the old
framing.
What is NOT wrong, and the text says so: the trade THE OFFER describes is
real and the taken rate genuinely moves 40.7% to 48.7%. One consequence was
overstated, by three times.
Written in v0.15, repeated in v0.16, and survived v0.19.1 correcting the
identical error in the table beside it. Flagged again by the peer session
while mapping citation paths, which is the third time this figure has been
caught by somebody reading it rather than by anything checking it — and the
argument for the derived-source markers now going onto it.
npm run check: 20 guards pass.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
